A Poem Stitched In Love

Bring me a needle,
                Bring me some thread.
                I'll stitch you a poem
                That's never been read.

                Each letter and word,
                Are the thread that I'll use,
                The needle, my pen,
                Your devotion my muse.

                As needle and thread
                Sew together a seam,
                My pen and my words,
                Will stitch together a theme.

                The theme will be love,
                The words from my soul,
                Stitched with great care
                For you to behold.

               When the last word is penned,
                Like a final snipped thread,
                I'll present you this poem,
                Just like I said.     



2/2012
Entered in Rob Carmack's Screwed !V contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ward Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 1:02 PM
A neat poem with a nice throw-away line to finish. Congratulations on your win. Julia, xx
Merryman Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 9:10 PM
Thank you, Julia!
Allison Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 6:29 PM
a delightful rhyme - congrats this time:-) hugs jan xx
Merryman Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 8:28 PM
Thank you, Jan!
A  Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 3:00 PM
Kim, A lovely win, Love **SKAT**
Merryman Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 8:21 PM
Thank you, Skat!
A   Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 2:03 PM
nice win
Merryman Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 8:19 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 7:51 AM
You are an excellent seamstress. Congrats.
Merryman Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 8:17 PM
Thank you, Richard! What a sweet thing to say.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 3:40 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Kim!
Merryman Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 8:17 PM
Thank you, Dr. Upma!
Davis Avatar
November 4, 2013 at 7:24 PM
This is a sweet and caring write for someone special. Nice job
Novotny Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 12:42 PM
Oh my goodness! This is just the 2nd work I've added to my favorites, and it is an absolute joy to read. Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 9:59 PM
wow!! this one didn't win?? Gosh,I am seeing a ton of great thread entries that did not even win. Well,I thought it was fantastic metaphor.
Cooper Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 8:41 PM
lovely rhyme.
Babcock Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 8:50 AM
A awesome poem for the contest. I like the way you use the needle and thread to stitch the theme. love phyl
Goff Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 8:05 AM
you've a sweet temperment, Kim! beautiful! jimbo
Goller Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 4:41 PM
A lovely story poem stitched with love,I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
Mjelde Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 3:44 PM
Nice poem, with good rhymes and you pick your words well! xoxoxo
Pettit Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 1:58 PM
A nice poem with a sartorial theme. Good work Kim.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 1:52 PM
A beautiful read, Kim. It has a lovely flow. Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!
Richards Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 1:50 PM
And a dandy poem it is, Kim!! You are a brilliant seamstress!! This made me smile!
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