Brian Strand Poet Free verse

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I re posted this 2013 poem in open form to complement my blog on FREE VERSE

A Poem Sans Punctuation Marks

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Exquisite
moments
                   float
                    to
and fro
to 
              and
                   fro
as
a
               feather
on
a
         breeze
                this way
and
that
              then
                   settle
as
a
letter
                  upon
                   memory's
welcome
door
                    mat

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John Lawless April 25, 2017 at 6:52 AM the breaks and separation slowed my roll through this and added impact to its tone. Brian Strand April 25, 2017 at 8:20 AM Thanks John

White Wolf April 25, 2017 at 5:23 AM Very creative, Brian! Love it mate! Brian Strand April 25, 2017 at 6:52 AM Thanks WW