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A Poem of 5 One Liners

Oranges kill time in an awakened nexus The unconscious at play in its deep plexus In the glossy valley of Longmont twin peaks From nowhere clouds pull together very quick Battle of the sexes wonderfully opens their window panes _________________________________________________ 21 February, 2016

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Date: 2/22/2016 3:32:00 PM
You're a very unique writer, Probir. Your poetry isn't obviously understood, and thus makes causes the reader to probe deeper. I see those opened window panes as opening each other's hearts to our differences (hence the "battle" of the sexes) ... and an orange is an amusing fruit to place in a poem, because it's always that "one" word that has no rhymes! May those little gray cells in your "deep plexus" continue to congregate.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/23/2016 3:25:00 AM
Thank you... There may be still other window panes as well...
Date: 2/21/2016 5:36:00 PM
Five for five!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/22/2016 12:28:00 AM
Thank you for being as liberal as the sky...

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