A Poem Named Sue

Where did our common sense go?
Did we throw it overboard?
Did starting over call for
Common sense to be ignored?
In my mind a thought took space
While peering down a castle wall;
Odd...
No rail?
No signage in my face?
Left to my senses not to fall?
This thought then forged a finite shape,
One single word did sum it all;
One word back home you can't escape...
Sue!
Our wont to Sue
Sue one
Sue all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/21/2017 2:16:00 PM
LOL my dear a very telling poem about the human predicament...litidgeous.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 8/22/2017 8:37:00 AM
That be the perfect word! Nobody so far has drawn the comparison to the song "A boy Named Sue", left that name to make him strong... ;) Thanks for the visit! xomo
Date: 7/19/2017 1:08:00 PM
Your poem is witty, but I disagree. I'm all for suing and safety precautions!
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Date: 7/12/2017 10:10:00 AM
Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/12/2017 11:58:00 AM
Thank you Funom! Honoured my friend :) xomo!
Date: 7/4/2017 7:06:00 AM
Everyone wants to find someone to blame for their circumstances. It's pretty silly. Love your poem :)
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/5/2017 7:05:00 AM
Indeed! Love that you love it :)
Date: 7/3/2017 3:03:00 PM
- Crazy world, great written Maureen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/4/2017 7:04:00 AM
The people world is insane indeed :) merci! xomo
Date: 6/20/2017 1:49:00 AM
LOL mo, how could I have missed this little gem! And it's so true.... sigh.... Hugs from ton Piroet
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/20/2017 8:16:00 PM
Sigh indeed. Federal town, my city is especially uptight. Hugs sweet P!
Date: 6/15/2017 10:19:00 PM
The ultimate recourse I assume, no sense talking and reasoning things out. What a country...
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/16/2017 1:37:00 PM
A North American phenomenon for sure, where you can sue for being burned by your hot coffee. To quote the forever wise Charlie Brown "good grief"!
Date: 6/15/2017 6:54:00 PM
Clever to write a poem about this.
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/16/2017 1:38:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 6/15/2017 6:05:00 PM
As we say down here, You can't get blood out of a turnip. Then people wonder why everything costs so much.
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Date: 6/15/2017 11:53:00 AM
I had this lady tell me once she was going to Sue me and I said, "But I thought your name was Diane?" Just kidding...seems like all the rage anymore, doesn't it? Nice one Maureen
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Date: 6/16/2017 1:42:00 PM
Heh heh ;)
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