Paula Goldsmith Poet Couplet

A Poem Lovely As a Garden

My beautiful spring fresh flowers,
Budding after a rain showers.
 
Pretty butterflies are flying,
Flower to flower are spying.
 
The fountain was filled with water, 
Did I see a swimming otter.
 
All the tall green weeds I must pull,
Now I have another bagful. 
 
I am so tried and very hot,
All flowers are out of each pot.
 
Time to rest with a cup of tea, 
Watch out here comes a yellow bee.
 
 
 
Date Written: 3/1/2022
Soup Syllable Count~All 8'ssss

Honorable Mention

A poem lovely as a Contest Judged: 3/4/2022 
Sponsored by: Margarita Lillico

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Bill Baker March 17, 2022 at 2:41 PM Congrats on the high place, Paula. I enjoyed the read. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Paula Goldsmith March 18, 2022 at 1:00 PM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this garden win. Glad you enjoyed my garden write. Have a blessed day/weekend......

Vijay Pandit March 5, 2022 at 8:58 AM Much vibrancy in your opening lines. Enjoyed the voice of your poem, Paula. Congrats on your win. Paula Goldsmith March 5, 2022 at 4:59 PM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this garden win. Glad you enjoyed the voice of my write. Have a blessed day.......................

Valsa George March 4, 2022 at 6:41 PM Really enjoyed your garden resurrected after winter ! Weeding is a task for any one who keeps a garden .... agree fully ! Glad for the honorable mention Paula... ! Love and hugs ! Paula Goldsmith March 5, 2022 at 7:28 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this garden win. Glad you love my write. I wish I had this garden. Have a blessed day.......................

Len Gasun March 4, 2022 at 4:51 PM This splendid poem makes me want to visit your garden my dear friend, Paula. I loved and enjoyed reading it a lot. Congratulations on your win! Have a wonderful day always. Take care. Hugs Paula Goldsmith March 5, 2022 at 7:27 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this garden win. Glad you love my garden write. Have a blessed day.......................

M. L. Kiser March 3, 2022 at 3:21 PM Yep, watch out for that bee; he's going to pollinate those flowers; enjoyed this. Paula Goldsmith March 5, 2022 at 7:24 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you are enjoyed this write. Yes, watch garden for the bees. Have a blessed day.......................

Panagiota Romios March 3, 2022 at 8:19 AM You have a scented way in these verse. I also want to be in your garden Lovely! Panagiota Paula Goldsmith March 5, 2022 at 7:23 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you are enjoying my garden. I want to be in a garden too. Have a blessed day.......................

Sam Kauffman March 1, 2022 at 3:39 PM Paula, I want to spend time in your garden watching honey bees and butterflies! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings for you and your lovely garden! Paula Goldsmith March 5, 2022 at 7:21 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you like my garden. I love everything about a garden. Have a blessed day.......................