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A Poem Lovely As a Garden

My beautiful spring fresh flowers, Budding after a rain showers. Pretty butterflies are flying, Flower to flower are spying. The fountain was filled with water, Did I see a swimming otter. All the tall green weeds I must pull, Now I have another bagful. I am so tried and very hot, All flowers are out of each pot. Time to rest with a cup of tea, Watch out here comes a yellow bee. Date Written: 3/1/2022 Soup Syllable Count~All 8'ssss Honorable Mention A poem lovely as a Contest Judged: 3/4/2022 Sponsored by: Margarita Lillico

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Bill Baker

Date: 3/17/2022 2:41:00 PM

Congrats on the high place, Paula. I enjoyed the read. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/18/2022 1:00:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this garden win. Glad you enjoyed my garden write. Have a blessed day/weekend......

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/5/2022 8:58:00 AM

Much vibrancy in your opening lines. Enjoyed the voice of your poem, Paula. Congrats on your win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2022 4:59:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this garden win. Glad you enjoyed the voice of my write. Have a blessed day.......................

Valsa George

Date: 3/4/2022 6:41:00 PM

Really enjoyed your garden resurrected after winter ! Weeding is a task for any one who keeps a garden .... agree fully ! Glad for the honorable mention Paula... ! Love and hugs !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2022 7:28:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this garden win. Glad you love my write. I wish I had this garden. Have a blessed day.......................

Len Gasun

Date: 3/4/2022 4:51:00 PM

This splendid poem makes me want to visit your garden my dear friend, Paula. I loved and enjoyed reading it a lot. Congratulations on your win! Have a wonderful day always. Take care. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2022 7:27:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this garden win. Glad you love my garden write. Have a blessed day.......................

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/3/2022 3:21:00 PM

Yep, watch out for that bee; he's going to pollinate those flowers; enjoyed this.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2022 7:24:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you are enjoyed this write. Yes, watch garden for the bees. Have a blessed day.......................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/3/2022 8:19:00 AM

You have a scented way in these verse. I also want to be in your garden Lovely! Panagiota

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2022 7:23:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you are enjoying my garden. I want to be in a garden too. Have a blessed day.......................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/1/2022 3:39:00 PM

Paula, I want to spend time in your garden watching honey bees and butterflies! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings for you and your lovely garden!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/5/2022 7:21:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you like my garden. I love everything about a garden. Have a blessed day.......................