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A Poem Lovely As a Garden

My beautiful spring fresh flowers,
Budding after a rain showers.
 
Pretty butterflies are flying,
Flower to flower are spying.
 
The fountain was filled with water, 
Did I see a swimming otter.
 
All the tall green weeds I must pull,
Now I have another bagful. 
 
I am so tried and very hot,
All flowers are out of each pot.
 
Time to rest with a cup of tea, 
Watch out here comes a yellow bee.
 
 
 
Date Written: 3/1/2022
Soup Syllable Count~All 8'ssss

Honorable Mention

A poem lovely as a Contest Judged: 3/4/2022 
Sponsored by: Margarita Lillico

Copyright © Paula Goldsmith | Year Posted 2022

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Bill Baker Date: 3/17/2022 2:41:00 PM Congrats on the high place, Paula. I enjoyed the read. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/18/2022 1:00:00 PM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this garden win. Glad you enjoyed my garden write. Have a blessed day/weekend......

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/5/2022 8:58:00 AM Much vibrancy in your opening lines. Enjoyed the voice of your poem, Paula. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/5/2022 4:59:00 PM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this garden win. Glad you enjoyed the voice of my write. Have a blessed day.......................

Valsa George Date: 3/4/2022 6:41:00 PM Really enjoyed your garden resurrected after winter ! Weeding is a task for any one who keeps a garden .... agree fully ! Glad for the honorable mention Paula... ! Love and hugs ! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/5/2022 7:28:00 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this garden win. Glad you love my write. I wish I had this garden. Have a blessed day.......................

Len Gasun Date: 3/4/2022 4:51:00 PM This splendid poem makes me want to visit your garden my dear friend, Paula. I loved and enjoyed reading it a lot. Congratulations on your win! Have a wonderful day always. Take care. Hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/5/2022 7:27:00 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this garden win. Glad you love my garden write. Have a blessed day.......................

M. L. Kiser Date: 3/3/2022 3:21:00 PM Yep, watch out for that bee; he's going to pollinate those flowers; enjoyed this. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/5/2022 7:24:00 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you are enjoyed this write. Yes, watch garden for the bees. Have a blessed day.......................

Panagiota Romios Date: 3/3/2022 8:19:00 AM You have a scented way in these verse. I also want to be in your garden Lovely! Panagiota Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/5/2022 7:23:00 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you are enjoying my garden. I want to be in a garden too. Have a blessed day.......................

Sam Kauffman Date: 3/1/2022 3:39:00 PM Paula, I want to spend time in your garden watching honey bees and butterflies! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings for you and your lovely garden! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/5/2022 7:21:00 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you like my garden. I love everything about a garden. Have a blessed day.......................