A Poem For You -First Collaboration With Michael J Falotico-

A Poem for You By Michael J. Falotico & Dinda Minardi
(Finished in August 14, 2011) ~Dinda~ Same like yesterday of yesterdays, I sit under this three He sits on the woodenbench Before, he just him in the same ways Then unique him set free Tastes like dewy meets thirsty to drenched I’ve sighted his eyes, down to nose, slide onto his lips How come a stranger makes me beat my heart faster? I can’t imagine if he talks to me, can I bear the shock waves? I wonder, when will I get that eager to see his face closer? My underestimation has been impressed wider I used to be a talker. With him around, I’m only an observer What can I say, I am now an admirer Atleast this park provides me air that's clearer So I can still be sober ~Michael~ A day in the park seems to take a change.. I try to write words but they spill out strange.. This blank page is being played with by the sun.. Shadows crawl up and down but none with fun.. My eyes travel past the wishing well to a tree.. A smile that shines but I only wonder is it for me.. All these words I write she can't see or hear... My legs are frozen from this beauty I fear... ~Dinda~ Who is he? He robbed my breath and blocked my sanity Could he be? The one who’ll keep me from uncertainty Or it’s just my brain mutiny because I want him too badly? How should I know? My self-esteem suddenly low Should I start it first, or would it only make out worse? What a perfection he has, I can only gasp By his all I sigh, while my hands sweating on my lap ~ Michael~ Well she is moving closer, what should I say? I will tell her I'm drawing a picture of today.. When she see's there is no paint only words and letters.. I answer "I have drawn a poem of you" which I feel is better.. With no words we kissed and smiled for hours.. I flipped the page over and drew you a flower... *I had fun in this collaboration. It was my first collaboration and I feel honored to collaborate with such sweet poet like Mr. Falotico. I hope you enjoy! :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/6/2011 5:01:00 PM
PArt 2 is up and I am so proud to have worked with you again.... Many more to come I hope.... love and hugs Michael
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Date: 9/6/2011 12:09:00 PM
this is wonderful. I like the play back and forth. Also "shock waves" - a cool description, amongst many others... a sweet write together :)
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Date: 8/16/2011 12:36:00 AM
how wonderful you did this with that sweetie, MIchael. It's really a fun thing to do and good practice with another poet! An enjoyable poem from both of you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/15/2011 6:59:00 PM
a lovely collaboration Dinda and Michael and excellent visuals energize this poetic art ... amazing how the two of u blend very well.. a refreshing pleasant romantic read ..kudos to u both...
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Date: 8/15/2011 12:21:00 PM
My dear Poet friend , this was such a pleasure to work with you on this piece. I do look forward to more collabs in the future. Luv Michael
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Date: 8/15/2011 3:06:00 AM
wow! very lovely,,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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