A Poem For 'E' By Thomas Eric Stanton

She asked me if I had a goal
She asked me if I had
Fantasized
Being the
Hunter
Or
The
Hunted

For 
Four
Years

I had crossed and re crossed the big cats tracks

Across a
Riverbed
Always measuring the pace
Speed
Weight
And
Distance of he and i

She said
He has dismissed you

So far

When
He is hungry enough
He will eat you

For four years
I have been doing what I thought was
a
Dance with
The
Lion

She said
No
He
Was only pissing
On your
Footprints

When I reviewed my films
Of the prints over
The years

His over
Mine

Mine
Over
His

I noticed
That there was a slight
Wet line
Over all the 
Prints

a
Car
On the road
Somewhere
Ahead of you
Recently
There

But now unseen

Laying
Down

a

Thin

Dark

Fresh

Line

Of
Oil

Just ahead of you

And you know that the engine is dying.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/3/2011 6:17:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Thomas. May the sun shine down on you and bring great joy to your life now and always. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/17/2012 10:57:00 PM
Thank you Carol-kind thoughts, now well-taken. Tom
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