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A Plastic Bag

...from the movie, 'American Beauty' A plastic bag, a windy day, darting, dancing high and low, coquettish in her flight of fancy, all in all, a one-bag show; a street performer with a twist, I wish you could have seen her, a holder meant for groceries, an no-name ballerina. Erratic, yes, but orchestrated, it's as if a puppeteer controlled the choreography, a protege without a peer; she soared and swooped, this virtuoso, then the errant wind was gone, and I was left to ruminate, an audience of one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/9/2016 7:38:00 AM
Great write Keith. I was left enthralled by this same occurrence just lat night. Well formatted, I like the subtle rhyme in the 2nd and 4th line of each stanza.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/9/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thank you my friend! much appreciated. Keith
Date: 2/8/2016 3:01:00 PM
You take an everyday occurrence and turned it into a stimulating poem. Well done! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/8/2016 3:04:00 PM
Thanks Matthew. Only when you see the scene from the movie will you realize just how remarkable it was! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 2/8/2016 2:51:00 PM
Awesome description in this poem. Love how you had this bag dancing across the sky to an audience of one. love phyl
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/8/2016 2:58:00 PM
Thanks Phyl! It's a famous scene from the movie 'American Beauty,' once seen, it can never be forgotten! Best wishes, Keith

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