A Plastic Bag

...from the movie, 'American Beauty'


A plastic bag, a windy day,
darting, dancing high and low,
coquettish in her flight of fancy,
all in all, a one-bag show;
a street performer with a twist,
I wish you could have seen her,
a holder meant for groceries,
an no-name ballerina.

Erratic, yes, but orchestrated,
it's as if a puppeteer
controlled the choreography,
a protege without a peer;
she soared and swooped, this virtuoso,
then the errant wind was gone,
no pirouettes to look upon,
and I was left to ruminate, 
an audience of one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/19/2012 9:25:00 PM
I have never seen american beauty. But i thought the poetry here was lovely, elegantly worded, i liked it!
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Date: 7/11/2012 8:08:00 PM
Just lovely for my mind to see the dance of this strange partner but the acrobatics are wonderful and your words provide the grace to perform with the wond. Such a treasure to read Keith!
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Date: 7/11/2012 7:36:00 PM
Yes....I loved that scene in the movie, and you have done it justice with this poem ..."no name ballerina"....wow!!! Great work, Keith!
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Date: 7/11/2012 1:19:00 PM
great write Keith,love it
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Date: 7/11/2012 7:55:00 AM
A wonderful write, Keith! Fun to find something to bring into a poem. "Plastc Bags", papers, or whatnot, can take on their own dance when entertained by "this virtuoso".:) love, Mikki
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Date: 7/11/2012 7:45:00 AM
I am so happy I was able to read your poetry today Keith. Thank you for sharing your writing with us always. So many diverse poems here and always a pleasure to read. Hoping you will continue to find the inspiration to write. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/10/2012 6:04:00 PM
i remember that scene so vividly and you've perfectly captured that joyous plastic bag dance. what fun that you've rhymed "could have seen her" and "ballerina" - that is clever! this is another gem, keith, which i very much enjoyed...
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Date: 7/10/2012 2:19:00 PM
In Canada we have to pay 5 cents for a plastic bag so now you do not see so many floating in the wind. NICE flowing poem you have penned. love phyl
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Date: 7/10/2012 1:43:00 PM
Kieth, this write is one of my favorites! The free flowing feel that you describe is so wondrous, I love it! I would have liked to be the flowing bag in the cool breeze! Wonderful write! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/10/2012 9:43:00 AM
wonderful Keith great imagery and flow
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Date: 7/10/2012 9:22:00 AM
and you didn't use the word "kite" once - didn't need to. This is such a special one. "as if a puppeteer controlled the choreography" Bravo! love, Kathy p.s. I do hope that bag ended up in the recycle bin.
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Date: 7/10/2012 7:55:00 AM
This is very well written to the point, I am at a loss to remark or comment. Sincerely, Lucinda "Cindy"
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Date: 7/10/2012 7:43:00 AM
Enjoyed the expressiveness of this one..I could just see that plastic bag caught by the wind..I wonder where was it final landing??..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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