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A Place Where Are No Scars

I came to a place where are no cars
I see no dirt but the clear skies
It is night and I look at the sky
I am amazed, shocked and engrossed
By the view of uncountable amounts of stars

Flowers with sweet scent refreshes the sense
The stars look brighter, the air blows delight
The sound of the lake and the tweets of the birds
Lead me reach inside, and find my own lights

Here, the sky above shows life
Where I live is covered with knife
Poisoning is what we all do to the nature
Broadening the dirt and pollution is quite rife
I came to a place where are no scars.

Sirat Haidary
11/Sept/2014

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/25/2025 7:23:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A

Date: 5/4/2016 11:42:00 AM

Hi Sirat, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2016 7:38:00 PM

Sirat, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA -

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2015 8:55:00 AM

Sirat, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT

Nick Pierce

Date: 2/21/2015 7:29:00 AM

Is the first line meant to be 'no cars' or is it meant to be 'no scars'?

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 1/31/2015 1:34:00 PM

A clean place and well enlightened is your poem sending to miracle of ontological argument .Happy to visit a place where are no scars.Best regards,O.B.