Sirat Ahmad Haidary Poet Pastoral

A Place Where Are No Scars

I came to a place where are no cars
I see no dirt but the clear skies
It is night and I look at the sky
I am amazed, shocked and engrossed
By the view of uncountable amounts of stars

Flowers with sweet scent refreshes the sense
The stars look brighter, the air blows delight
The sound of the lake and the tweets of the birds
Lead me reach inside, and find my own lights

Here, the sky above shows life
Where I live is covered with knife
Poisoning is what we all do to the nature
Broadening the dirt and pollution is quite rife
I came to a place where are no scars.

Sirat Haidary
11/Sept/2014

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Beata Agustin March 25, 2025 at 7:23 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Skat A May 4, 2016 at 11:42 AM Hi Sirat, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A January 27, 2016 at 7:38 PM Sirat, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA -

Skat A September 9, 2015 at 8:55 AM Sirat, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT

Nick Pierce February 21, 2015 at 7:29 AM Is the first line meant to be 'no cars' or is it meant to be 'no scars'?

Ovidiu Bocsa January 31, 2015 at 1:34 PM A clean place and well enlightened is your poem sending to miracle of ontological argument .Happy to visit a place where are no scars.Best regards,O.B.

Eve Roper October 23, 2014 at 2:29 PM Such a nice pen Sirat, for life flourishes for you than what you are us too. :) eve Sirat Ahmad Haidary October 23, 2014 at 3:43 PM Thank you very much for stopping by Eve Roper.