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A place where are no scars

I came to a place where are no cars
I see no dirt but the clear skies
It is night and I look at the sky
I am amazed, shocked and engrossed
By the view of uncountable amounts of stars

Flowers with sweet scent refreshes the sense
The stars look brighter, the air blows delight
The sound of the lake and the tweets of the birds
Lead me reach inside, and find my own lights

Here, the sky above shows life
Where I live is covered with knife
Poisoning is what we all do to the nature
Broadening the dirt and pollution is quite rife
I came to a place where are no scars.

Sirat Haidary

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 5/4/2016 11:42:00 AM
Hi Sirat, I'm just here visiting your poem once again. If you ever return to post, I'd like to come back to read your newest. Happy Days **SKAT**
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Date: 1/27/2016 7:38:00 PM
Sirat, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA -
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Date: 9/9/2015 8:55:00 AM
Sirat, enjoyed reading your verse today. SKAT
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Date: 2/21/2015 7:29:00 AM
Is the first line meant to be 'no cars' or is it meant to be 'no scars'?
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Date: 1/31/2015 1:34:00 PM
A clean place and well enlightened is your poem sending to miracle of ontological argument .Happy to visit a place where are no scars.Best regards,O.B.
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Date: 10/23/2014 2:29:00 PM
Such a nice pen Sirat, for life flourishes for you than what you are us too. :) eve
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Sirat Ahmad Haidary
Date: 10/23/2014 3:43:00 PM
Thank you very much for stopping by Eve Roper.