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Poetic Form: Crown of Sonnets: Italian or Petrachan
Inspired: 2024 April 06
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#10: No Room At The Inn They blossomed they did like rows of roses. Places for lodgers, those traveling sourced, their reasons countered their changing poses, frequent stays and returns have been endorsed. There will be places that might be lacking for whatever reasons that there may be, the people won't stay there, less foot tracking, as sites may have Roach Motels that you'll see. There will be double-booking caused concerns, leaving people stranded, no way, no stay, whereby many shorten trips--forced returns. Trends rallied lawsuits; be that as it may, X-X Bethlehem, then Jerusalem, He'll lay.

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Date: 4/7/2024 6:14:00 AM
I appreciate the significance of the title, one that immediately drew me into your poem. Liked these lines: the people won't stay there, less foot tracking, as sites may have Roach Motels that you'll see. Creative you are!
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Date: 4/7/2024 7:02:00 AM
Thank you, Sara, for your highlighted phrases of note, much too kind. Aloha, William

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