#2: A Day Ends Amidst the noisy sand castles crumble, afeared shook ceases, a slamming silence, tis a rippling pond cross o'er to humble, tranquility transfers, hours for nonsense, these shooting stars like asteroids deflect your day lived is nevermore, stay awhile, happiness claims a heart's duty ... connect, righteousness pause, funny things cause a smile, snags voided, problems solved, caveat crossed, in the least misfortune, up in the air, if there is no closure, there'll be a cost, to exhaust all that is human ... prayer. Period of cleansing and making whole, goal hour is here ... the spirit joins the soul.
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