Notes About The Poem
Poetic Form: Crown of Sonnets: Italian or Petrachan
Inspired: 2024 February 04
Image: N/A

A Place Not Meant To Be: 01

#1: A Day Begins Sand grains station elevated for want in the cool starless relics spell of dark a sun behold horizon that dews haunt favoring a virgin's touch settled spark illuminate sprawl hope echoes a night prejudge ripens new to the golden day freedom speculate oddly slept by light as shadiness telltale spots dead astray undulating surge flowing wetness stir uneasy granules settle in hair strands surf push nonsensical ashore transfer waterline mind a sun aloof shift sands a shoreline of lying seashells mumble amidst the noisy sand castles crumble
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Baker Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 9:00 PM
Nice Crown of Sonnets, Hilo. I liked your thoughts on the seaside. Have a great week, my friend. Bill
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 9:26 PM
Surely appreciated, Bill. Back home and closer now, my friend. TC and be well, Aloha, William
Juju The Dragon Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 5:05 PM
Mystically Calming, with the vision of your words
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 5, 2024 at 8:25 AM
Thanks, Carlene, for your kind sharing. Aloha, William
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