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A Place Infinite

and in my dream I am in a bizarre, foreign place a place of infinite shades of green veiled in haze- and I, a striking, ravishing exotic being with enchanting strange butterflies and birds- I am lost in a sea of lush, dripping foliage where daggers of heat pierce my skin . . . I belong in this steamy, tropical forest in this deep-colored and green stained exotic land far-off and distant, where all is enticing and mysterious wildflowers grow- above me the tree canopy is a dazzling jet blue sky hidden, birds sing melodic songs . . . here in is a hypnotic peace, untamed and apart and all I need do- is close my eyes _____________________ July 1, 2017 Poetry/Free Verse/A Place /Infinite Copyright Protected, ID 07-9169-65-01 All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France Entered in the Standard contest, Your Best Poem In The Last Year Sponsor, Silent One, Judged 07/2017 First Place

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Date: 2/8/2018 11:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings! Great choice for the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/8/2018 6:21:00 PM
A captivating dreamscape Broken Wings filled with enchanting imagery. Congratulations on your fantastic win.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/5/2018 9:08:00 PM
Beautiful poem that transports to a heavenly haven. Congrats on this lovely winner, BW.
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Date: 2/5/2018 4:04:00 PM
Very deep poem Constance, I can see why it is your best poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..
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Date: 7/1/2017 2:54:00 PM
lovely imaginative write, as always - hope you are much better & that the get well card has reached you. mum sends her love too x
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Date: 7/1/2017 1:49:00 PM
What a mesmerizing dream. Very well done 7 Peace, Love and Joy
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Date: 7/1/2017 10:24:00 AM
I say a very beautiful exotic dream and I enjoyed it :)
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Date: 7/1/2017 9:38:00 AM
Very properly named Constance, best wishes....
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Date: 7/1/2017 9:29:00 AM
What an exotic ride you have taken us on, Constance! Beautiful place to dream of:)
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Date: 7/1/2017 9:19:00 AM
This is very nice to think about. I like the Jet blue sky line :)
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