A Place Infinite


and in my dream I am in a bizarre, foreign place
a place of infinite shades of green
     veiled in haze-
and I, a striking, ravishing exotic being
         with enchanting strange butterflies and birds-
I am lost in a sea of lush, dripping foliage
   where daggers of heat pierce my skin . . . 
               I belong in this steamy, tropical forest
in this deep-colored and green stained exotic land
  far-off and distant, where all is enticing
         and mysterious wildflowers grow-
     above me the tree canopy is a dazzling jet blue sky
hidden, birds sing melodic songs  . . . 
               here in is a hypnotic peace, untamed
    and apart
               and all I need do-   is close my eyes

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July 1, 2017


Poetry/Free Verse/A Place /Infinite
Copyright Protected, ID 07-9169-65-01
All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France

Entered in the Standard contest, Your Best Poem In The Last Year
Sponsor, Silent One, Judged 07/2017

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 11:17 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings! Great choice for the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
Ashley Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 6:21 PM
A captivating dreamscape Broken Wings filled with enchanting imagery. Congratulations on your fantastic win.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 9:08 PM
Beautiful poem that transports to a heavenly haven. Congrats on this lovely winner, BW.
One Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Very deep poem Constance, I can see why it is your best poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..
Horne Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 2:54 PM
lovely imaginative write, as always - hope you are much better & that the get well card has reached you. mum sends her love too x
Hardison Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 1:49 PM
What a mesmerizing dream. Very well done 7 Peace, Love and Joy
Downing  Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 10:24 AM
I say a very beautiful exotic dream and I enjoyed it :)
Smith Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 9:38 AM
Very properly named Constance, best wishes....
Daniel Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 9:29 AM
What an exotic ride you have taken us on, Constance! Beautiful place to dream of:)
Sands Avatar
July 1, 2017 at 9:19 AM
This is very nice to think about. I like the Jet blue sky line :)
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