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A Place

I have a place for secrets I have a place for love I have a place for hopes for dreams I have a place for voices waiting to be heard I have a place for peace I have a place for anger for humor for fear I Have a Place For Places A Place Inside My Heart

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John Freeman

Date: 2/27/2010 5:54:00 PM

Oh yes I do too have a special place inside my heart, that is where love hids, when I thin it is missing, then I return, and find there is still plenty left. You're an awesome poetess my dear, keep up the good work. And remember, Love will write your poetry for you, from your heart, for love is poetry. God bless you darling, and welcome to soup. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Date: 2/27/2010 4:59:00 PM

I really like the fact that although you are a young writer you have seen the benefits of brevity. The repetition works. I like that despite challenges in life you have a sense of hope. I would categorize this as free verse instead of leaving it the I don't know category. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/27/2010 4:49:00 PM

A lovely poem, Caleigh. Enjoyed! Best wishes, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 2/27/2010 3:50:00 PM

Simply delightful Caleigh >> James

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/27/2010 3:42:00 PM

Keep exploring those places! Hugs Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/27/2010 2:32:00 PM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Caleigh. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 2/27/2010 1:51:00 PM

Once again, outstanding. :)) xoxo