A Pink And Blue Sky

Dawn pierces the dark at first light as flocks of mourning doves take flight. And though sullied skies seem so stark: at first light, Dawn pierces the dark. Sol liquefies like molten gold that's incredible to behold. For just as the sun starts to rise, like molten gold, Sol liquefies. Darkness flees into the shadows, like a merging murder of crows. And as birds abandon the trees; into the shadows; darkness flees. Colors intensify with light as sunlight supersedes moonlight. And inking a pink and blue sky with light, colors intensify.

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Date: 1/3/2023 9:39:00 AM
Back, again, with congratulations Emile. So wonderful to see this delightful poem in the winners circle again! Happy New Year my friend!
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Date: 1/3/2023 12:09:00 PM
Thanks, Sam, I appreciate it, have a Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/22/2022 10:30:00 AM
Back with my congrats on this well deserved win, Emile.
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Date: 12/22/2022 10:44:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea, I appreciate it, Merry Christmas my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/21/2022 2:27:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 12/21/2022 8:38:00 AM
Thanks, Sara, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/19/2022 7:20:00 PM
Hi Emile A bit late but have just read your lovely Swap Quatrain and see you had a win and well deserved I could really see the light of day emerge through your words in your 4 Stanza’s a good read Cheers Christine
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Date: 10/20/2022 8:16:00 AM
Thanks, Christine, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/20/2022 9:29:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win! I loved this pink and blue gem the first time I read it and I am so delighted to see it on the winners list! Blessings to you my friend.
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Date: 9/20/2022 10:35:00 AM
Thanks, Sam, I both welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/11/2022 5:25:00 AM
Beautifully done. Congratulations on your top win. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/11/2022 8:15:00 AM
Thanks, Regina, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, God bless you my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/10/2022 7:22:00 AM
Great work put forth in this winner. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara
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Date: 9/10/2022 7:37:00 AM
Thanks, Sara, as always, I both welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/10/2022 6:46:00 AM
Emile, a beautiful Swap Quatrain poem, I love it and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _peace and tranquility ~
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Date: 9/10/2022 7:36:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/9/2022 9:29:00 PM
"like molten gold" - beautiful simile. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/10/2022 7:36:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/9/2022 5:56:00 PM
Back again to congratulate you on your superb win, Emile!
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Date: 9/10/2022 7:35:00 AM
Thanks, Unseeking, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/9/2022 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry in the contest. The imagery and the challenge of a Swap Quatrain undeniably superb! :)Paulette
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Date: 9/10/2022 7:34:00 AM
Thanks, Paulette, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/3/2022 3:37:00 PM
Very well done, Emile. Excellent example for your contest. I don't recall if there was a rule about this, but I don't think I've ever seen a swap quatrain with more than 8 syllables per line. I wonder if ten can be used. No matter. I have done a few of them in the past and I think I used only 8 syllable lines. I believe this to be one of the coolest poetry forms I ever saw invented in the new century!
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Date: 9/3/2022 4:20:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, I use 8 syllables per line, but because it isn't specified in the definition, I will accept other syllable counts. As always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/1/2022 10:54:00 AM
Emile, you have the true, clear eyesight and the heart of a poet. You are so cognizant of the seasons, nature and every way the seasons influence the world around us. What a delight to read your creative gems! Blessings my friend! Thank you for the inspiration!
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Date: 9/1/2022 12:34:00 PM
Thanks, Sam, wow; what can I say after such praise, but that your words honor me, my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/1/2022 9:25:00 AM
Emile, this is beautiful! You are so adept with this form. I love it. I need to try it again, but I could never measure up to you! I hope you are having a marvelous week.
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Date: 9/1/2022 10:10:00 AM
Thanks, Milt, I know you possess the talent to do this form justice, my friend. I look forward to reading it, Emile.
Date: 9/1/2022 9:01:00 AM
Interesting format
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Date: 9/9/2022 5:57:00 PM
I’ve penned a few swap quatrains ~ thanks for introducing this form to me
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Date: 9/1/2022 10:08:00 AM
Thanks, Unseeking, I hope you enter my new contest with a poem of your own, written in this format, my friend, Emile.
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