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A Pink and Blue Sky

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Dawn pierces the dark at first light as flocks of mourning doves take flight. And although the sky seems so stark at first light, Dawn pierces the dark. Sol liquefies like molten gold, it's incredible to behold. For just as the sun starts to rise, like molten gold, Sol liquefies. Darkness flees into the shadows like a merging murder of crows. And as birds abandon the trees, into the shadows, darkness flees. Colors intensify with light, sunlight superseding moonlight. And inking a pink and blue sky, with light; colors intensify.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/3/2023 9:39:00 AM

Back, again, with congratulations Emile. So wonderful to see this delightful poem in the winners circle again! Happy New Year my friend!

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/3/2023 12:09:00 PM

Thanks, Sam, I appreciate it, have a Happy New Year my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/22/2022 10:30:00 AM

Back with my congrats on this well deserved win, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/22/2022 10:44:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea, I appreciate it, Merry Christmas my friend, Emile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/21/2022 2:27:00 AM

Congratulations on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/21/2022 8:38:00 AM

Thanks, Sara, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Christine Watts

Date: 10/19/2022 7:20:00 PM

Hi Emile A bit late but have just read your lovely Swap Quatrain and see you had a win and well deserved I could really see the light of day emerge through your words in your 4 Stanza’s a good read Cheers Christine

Emile Pinet
Date: 10/20/2022 8:16:00 AM

Thanks, Christine, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/20/2022 9:29:00 AM

Emile, congratulations on your win! I loved this pink and blue gem the first time I read it and I am so delighted to see it on the winners list! Blessings to you my friend.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/20/2022 10:35:00 AM

Thanks, Sam, I both welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/11/2022 5:25:00 AM

Beautifully done. Congratulations on your top win. God bless you always. Love, Gina

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/11/2022 8:15:00 AM

Thanks, Regina, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments, God bless you my friend, Emile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/10/2022 7:22:00 AM

Great work put forth in this winner. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/10/2022 7:37:00 AM

Thanks, Sara, as always, I both welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 9/10/2022 6:46:00 AM

Emile, a beautiful Swap Quatrain poem, I love it and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _peace and tranquility ~

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/10/2022 7:36:00 AM

Thanks, Constance, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/9/2022 9:29:00 PM

"like molten gold" - beautiful simile. Congratulations!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/10/2022 7:36:00 AM

Thanks, Christuraj, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/9/2022 5:56:00 PM

Back again to congratulate you on your superb win, Emile!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/10/2022 7:35:00 AM

Thanks, Unseeking, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 9/9/2022 4:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning entry in the contest. The imagery and the challenge of a Swap Quatrain undeniably superb! :)Paulette

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/10/2022 7:34:00 AM

Thanks, Paulette, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2022 3:37:00 PM

Very well done, Emile. Excellent example for your contest. I don't recall if there was a rule about this, but I don't think I've ever seen a swap quatrain with more than 8 syllables per line. I wonder if ten can be used. No matter. I have done a few of them in the past and I think I used only 8 syllable lines. I believe this to be one of the coolest poetry forms I ever saw invented in the new century!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/3/2022 4:20:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea, I use 8 syllables per line, but because it isn't specified in the definition, I will accept other syllable counts. As always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/1/2022 10:54:00 AM

Emile, you have the true, clear eyesight and the heart of a poet. You are so cognizant of the seasons, nature and every way the seasons influence the world around us. What a delight to read your creative gems! Blessings my friend! Thank you for the inspiration!

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/1/2022 12:34:00 PM

Thanks, Sam, wow; what can I say after such praise, but that your words honor me, my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/1/2022 9:25:00 AM

Emile, this is beautiful! You are so adept with this form. I love it. I need to try it again, but I could never measure up to you! I hope you are having a marvelous week.

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/1/2022 10:10:00 AM

Thanks, Milt, I know you possess the talent to do this form justice, my friend. I look forward to reading it, Emile.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/1/2022 9:01:00 AM

Interesting format

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/9/2022 5:57:00 PM

I’ve penned a few swap quatrains ~ thanks for introducing this form to me

Emile Pinet
Date: 9/1/2022 10:08:00 AM

Thanks, Unseeking, I hope you enter my new contest with a poem of your own, written in this format, my friend, Emile.