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A pinch of salt

Tales always moving, Themes occuring in repeat History and radishes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/25/2021 10:10:00 AM
Yeah as they say history repeats itself sometimes in reverse as well... Well penned
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Joe Maverick
Date: 9/25/2021 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Pagunda for taking time to read and comment'
Date: 1/2/2020 10:23:00 AM
Always in repeat! Hello Joe :) Hope you have been well.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 9/29/2021 1:16:00 AM
Hi TJ Its a rather late reply, however thank you, it is much appreciated !
Date: 4/20/2019 11:44:00 AM
history's events are cyclical and this tanka captures their patterns...lovely, joe!..huggs
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nette onclaud
Date: 5/6/2019 4:29:00 PM
it is truly a senryu... joe, beautiful!
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nette onclaud
Date: 5/6/2019 4:27:00 PM
yes, joe... a tanka it is!
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Joe Maverick
Date: 4/30/2019 11:07:00 AM
Hello Nette, oops I just now realised I put the form of this wrongly, I should have been senryu I have changed it now, I must be well rusted up l'ol' I shall do a tanka next time though.'
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Joe Maverick
Date: 4/20/2019 1:11:00 PM
So good to hear from you Nette, My best wishes; thank you for taking time to read and comment.'
Date: 4/20/2019 3:50:00 AM
The middle line is my favorite, as themes always resurrect. I also like eating radishes with salt. Subtle poem that can create many meanings. Well done lol
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Joe Maverick
Date: 4/20/2019 10:19:00 AM
Thank you for your uplifting comment Brendan, I will look up your page when possible'