A Pilot of Paper Planes

     Always wanted to be a pilot
       With a paper plane, I tried it

     Guided it into a candle’s flame
       So much for my lifelong aim
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Jones Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 11:21 PM
Cute Gershon!
Mckeithan Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 1:03 PM
LOL Gershon. Just think of all the real plane mishaps happening! I lost my interest in flying.
Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 7:35 PM
Too many mishaps any way yon look at it today...
Flood Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 2:41 PM
Could’ve been worse, GW… could’ve continued on its flaming trajectory and hit the dog…. “WOOF!”.
Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 7:41 PM
Doggone it. Wish it would have. lol.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 11:44 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. Try being a pilot again "But" this time stay far away from the candle’s flame. Having fun this time??? Have a fun day as you write away..................
Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 7:44 PM
I may have burned my whatsamajigger! :) gw
Bauer Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 10:50 AM
Ha! This is hilarious , Gershon!
Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 7:45 PM
Thanks for seeing the humor in this one, Ilene!
DiMino Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 9:38 AM
Icarus Farmer -- why not? Well said. I've been an Icarus most everything I have done in life.
Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 7:50 PM
Where have all the fireflies gone, Icarus?!
M  Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 8:18 AM
Haha love it BB!! Debx
Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 7:54 PM
It loves you too, Deb. lol.
Hassall Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 4:07 AM
This made me laugh while drinking tea this morning! Nice one, Gershon!
Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 7:54 PM
Hope you didn't spill any tea there, Kathleen!
Cunningham Avatar
March 7, 2025 at 12:00 AM
Yikes, you need more practice Gershon. Tom
Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 7:57 PM
How many times you want me to burn my whatsitcalled, Tom?! lol.
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 11:32 PM
Qops! Well, all's well that ends well, since you probably got the flames out quickly. I really can't imagine explaining that to the insurance company otherwise!
Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 7:58 PM
Insurance? Covering damage from a paper plane? Drat it. My policy just expired... lol.
Tor Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 11:18 PM
Ha so sorry buddy. If you fail try again, and avoid that flame. It is better to try and fail than to fail to try... You tried...
Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2025 at 8:02 PM
I tried. I cried. ... OK... I lied. I laughed! :) gw
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