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A Pilot of Paper Planes

Always wanted to be a pilot With a paper plane, I tried it Guided it into a candle’s flame So much for my lifelong aim

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Date: 3/8/2025 11:21:00 PM
Cute Gershon!
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Date: 3/8/2025 1:03:00 PM
LOL Gershon. Just think of all the real plane mishaps happening! I lost my interest in flying.
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Date: 3/8/2025 7:35:00 PM
Too many mishaps any way yon look at it today...
Date: 3/7/2025 2:41:00 PM
Could’ve been worse, GW… could’ve continued on its flaming trajectory and hit the dog…. “WOOF!”.
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Date: 3/8/2025 7:41:00 PM
Doggone it. Wish it would have. lol.
Date: 3/7/2025 11:44:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun write. Try being a pilot again "But" this time stay far away from the candle’s flame. Having fun this time??? Have a fun day as you write away..................
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/8/2025 7:44:00 PM
I may have burned my whatsamajigger! :) gw
Date: 3/7/2025 10:50:00 AM
Ha! This is hilarious , Gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/8/2025 7:45:00 PM
Thanks for seeing the humor in this one, Ilene!
Date: 3/7/2025 9:38:00 AM
Icarus Farmer -- why not? Well said. I've been an Icarus most everything I have done in life.
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Date: 3/8/2025 7:50:00 PM
Where have all the fireflies gone, Icarus?!
Date: 3/7/2025 8:18:00 AM
Haha love it BB!! Debx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/8/2025 7:54:00 PM
It loves you too, Deb. lol.
Date: 3/7/2025 4:07:00 AM
This made me laugh while drinking tea this morning! Nice one, Gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/8/2025 7:54:00 PM
Hope you didn't spill any tea there, Kathleen!
Date: 3/7/2025 12:00:00 AM
Yikes, you need more practice Gershon. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/8/2025 7:57:00 PM
How many times you want me to burn my whatsitcalled, Tom?! lol.
Date: 3/6/2025 11:32:00 PM
Qops! Well, all's well that ends well, since you probably got the flames out quickly. I really can't imagine explaining that to the insurance company otherwise!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/8/2025 7:58:00 PM
Insurance? Covering damage from a paper plane? Drat it. My policy just expired... lol.
Date: 3/6/2025 11:18:00 PM
Ha so sorry buddy. If you fail try again, and avoid that flame. It is better to try and fail than to fail to try... You tried...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/8/2025 8:02:00 PM
I tried. I cried. ... OK... I lied. I laughed! :) gw

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