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A Piece of Tape

There was a lovely piece of tape Who’d dreamt of getting into shape It often thought «Why am I so round?» Seeing thin pencils on the ground. One day it saw a pretty pen And started being sad again. -Perhaps for me to be as slim Is worth to train hard in the gym. The tape was exercising hard. A year passed but no result. -Perhaps I’m born to be this way It doesn’t matter what I weigh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/12/2017 6:01:00 PM
Thank you!
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Date: 8/4/2017 7:44:00 AM
Thank you very much!
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Date: 8/3/2017 6:05:00 AM
I like this descriptive poetry that rhymes.Suggestion only..This looks much better if divided into three stanzas. All in one I enjoy reading it.The creativity is great.Thank you for the worthwhile read.I truly admire your talent.
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Date: 8/3/2017 4:03:00 AM
You have a nice writing style.At least the tape found out that it can't compare...Thanks for sharing...Have a lovely day
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Date: 8/3/2017 2:59:00 AM
great fun write Victoria!, enjoyed it much!
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