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A Piece of Cake

Clickety clackety Queen Marie Antoinette "Cake let them eat", she said When they'd no bread Due to her callousness, Improvisational French mob decided then "Off with her head" 09.02.2021

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/5/2021 7:05:00 AM

Congratulations on the win Jo! Linda

Wendy Watson

Date: 2/10/2021 12:34:00 PM

Spot on rhythmically Jo, a great title and cleverly phrased content. I enjoyed this.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/9/2021 10:35:00 PM

A head for bread, a sicky end for the Queen. love the poem and the form.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/9/2021 7:13:00 PM

Nice one but not so nice for the cake eater. She couldn’t have her cake and eat it too.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2021 1:46:00 PM

wow, you did a GREAT job with this difficult form.

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/9/2021 12:38:00 PM

Well-written, Jo! Like the theme! All the best for the contest! Hugs, Sandra

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 2/9/2021 7:34:00 AM

Great write. You should participate. It seems perfect to me to the best of my knowledge, but must admit I am not confident myself. Wrote first time for contest.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 2/9/2021 5:45:00 AM

Wonderful writing... God bless you with a win. Love and prayers, Gina

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/9/2021 1:17:00 AM

Lovely dactyl, Jo. Best for a win. ~~

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/9/2021 12:47:00 AM

It looks fine to me Jo ive gone to types of poems and it is the way you've written it. Tom