A Piece of Cake

Skin colour is icing on a cake
That needed some love to make and bake
If not to your taste
Please don't let it waste
Someone will love it, for Heaven's sake!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Makama Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 8:19 PM
Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!
Leffanta Avatar
June 10, 2020 at 1:19 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 4:57 PM
well said Rico, think there will be a few buns in the oven once lock down is over:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 2:13 PM
I suspect things are cooking already! Aloha! Rico
Faulkner Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 10:33 AM
Chocolate or vanilla, or mocha? I love em all!
Leffanta Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 1:48 PM
Children love to eat the frosting first! Aloha! Rico
Lamoureux Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 9:32 AM
Clever!
Leffanta Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 1:48 PM
Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico
One Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 7:08 AM
This is just brilliant...
Leffanta Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 1:47 PM
Thank you again for reading and your kind comment! Aloha! Rico
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 5, 2020 at 3:33 PM
Sweetness. x
Leffanta Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 1:47 PM
You can have your cake, and eat it, too! Aloha! Rico
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