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A Piece of Cake

Skin colour is icing on a cake That needed some love to make and bake If not to your taste Please don't let it waste Someone will love it, for Heaven's sake!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/8/2020 8:19:00 PM
Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/10/2020 1:19:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico
Date: 6/6/2020 4:57:00 PM
well said Rico, think there will be a few buns in the oven once lock down is over:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/7/2020 2:13:00 PM
I suspect things are cooking already! Aloha! Rico
Date: 6/6/2020 10:33:00 AM
Chocolate or vanilla, or mocha? I love em all!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/6/2020 1:48:00 PM
Children love to eat the frosting first! Aloha! Rico
Date: 6/6/2020 9:32:00 AM
Clever!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/6/2020 1:48:00 PM
Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico
Date: 6/6/2020 7:08:00 AM
This is just brilliant...
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/6/2020 1:47:00 PM
Thank you again for reading and your kind comment! Aloha! Rico
Date: 6/5/2020 3:33:00 PM
Sweetness. x
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/6/2020 1:47:00 PM
You can have your cake, and eat it, too! Aloha! Rico