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For Contest: Than-Bauk Variation

Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues

1 September 2024

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Picture the words your pen would write - Like Wordsworth might?

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Date: 9/22/2024 12:01:00 PM
I love this one. Well done, Terry and congrats
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/22/2024 2:25:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 9/19/2024 10:31:00 PM
Love this clever one so well written and delivered for the form! Different to most iv read and it stands out and i love especially “picture the words your pen would write” i did as i read this! Congratulations on your well deserved win! Sending you light
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Date: 9/20/2024 3:25:00 PM
Thanks, ‘Inky’, only ever wrote one of these before, for a contest… and forgot to enter it. Glad you enjoyed my second attempt.
Date: 9/18/2024 7:36:00 AM
Terry, this is excellent! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 9/20/2024 3:25:00 PM
Thanks, Janice. Appreciated. Terry
Date: 9/17/2024 9:57:00 PM
mighty write, congratulations dear poet.
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/20/2024 3:26:00 PM
Thanks, Thriveni
Date: 9/17/2024 5:42:00 PM
Clever! Congratulations, Terry!
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/20/2024 3:27:00 PM
Thanks for your appreciation, Kim. Terry
Date: 9/3/2024 7:56:00 PM
Excellent variation on a than-bauk, Terry. Flows perfectly, which is no easy task. You are headed for the winner's circle, methinks. ~ Gershon
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/4/2024 4:33:00 AM
According to Soup’s seemingly dubious ‘read’ count this has has pretty well 200 reads but 2 comments (each of which I much appreciate) so I kinda wonder if I missed the point.
Date: 9/2/2024 12:46:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful Than-Bauk write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away..................
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Date: 9/2/2024 1:51:00 PM
Only ever tried one of these before. Not sure if this fits the bill. The rules said no rhyme but the rhyme in this was purely incidental. Glad you enjoyed, Paula.
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