A Picnic In a Bird's Nest

A picnic in a bird's 
nest
cradled by the branch of a 
tree,
under the shade of green 
foliage
among birds in a picnic 
spree!

Cradled by the branch of a 
tree
sitting in the warmth of 
velvet nest,
among birds in a picnic 
spree
feeling lucky to be their 
guest!

Sitting in the warmth of 
velvet nest
listening to their sweet 
song,
feeling lucky to be their 
guest
among them for a whole 
day long!

Listening to their sweet 
song
dancing with them a little 
bit,
among them for a whole 
day long
enjoying their homely 
treat!

Dancing with them a little 
bit
sharing their joy and grief,
enjoying their homely 
treat
it is sure a grand picnic!

Sharing their joy and grief
under the shade of green 
foliage,
it is sure a grand picnic
a picnic in a bird's nest!



© 2011 kashinath 
karmakar (8th May 2011)
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/30/2013 6:51:00 AM
Congrats, Kash, on the win with this lovely write!!
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Date: 5/29/2013 7:48:00 PM
I saw this coming up in my reading and could hardly wait. What fun. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/29/2013 1:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win. AO
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Date: 5/29/2013 12:59:00 AM
it's always nice to see you showcased again with sweet poems like this one! congrats, Kash.
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Date: 5/28/2013 8:56:00 PM
Kash. Congratulations, with your awesome poem. Goodnight~LINDA
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Date: 5/20/2011 11:28:00 PM
Yours was quite unique, my friend. Congrats on the HM!
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Date: 5/19/2011 10:04:00 AM
Dear Kash, Congratulations on your success in Carol's Picnic Contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2011 10:01:00 AM
This is a fine piece of poetry on picnic,a picnic with the birds... Congrats kashi on you win..gautami
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Date: 5/18/2011 11:30:00 PM
Great work mate... to be amongst the birdies to share their leafy limb would put a smile on him good one mate Don
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:05:00 PM
Kashinath, so great to see you Honorably Mentioned with this great one. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/18/2011 12:03:00 PM
Hi Kash The one description I like the most in this poem is the velvet nest-I have seeeeen many nests as a kiddo growing up beside a large wooded area...velvet is a great way to describe the contents of their little abode. Congrats on this win. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/18/2011 11:53:00 AM
This is lovely. Worthy of a higher placement. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:10:00 AM
extraordinary theme, kashi...super cheers for the fine win! :) huggs
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:46:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kashinath. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:24:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Kash : )
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:10:00 AM
My congratulations on this HM win in the contest of carol, kashinath
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:16:00 AM
Congrats Kash on your HM in the picnic contest with this delightful write so charismatic luv..enjoy your special honor .. bravo ...
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Date: 5/18/2011 4:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/14/2011 6:58:00 PM
A poetess is simply a female poet. :) Thanks for visiting my poetry corner, Kashinath and commenting on the Checkered Laboratory. I am just a big kid, that's all. Smiles. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/11/2011 11:53:00 AM
Amusing and clever write. Good luck in the contest. Regards, Robert.
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:13:00 AM
uh OH! This is an intriguing twist to the traditional picnic! The birds are probably havin way more fun than their human counterparts! Fun stuff here. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/9/2011 10:14:00 AM
jeepers critters, kashi... what a different kind of picnic.. just gave me an idea! you;re in grreeeat shape! winning wishes to you.. my pages miss ya! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/9/2011 6:34:00 AM
I hope enjoying the holidays and this is outcome , a beautiful and lovely theme to ponder over, kashinath
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Date: 5/8/2011 8:53:00 PM
ps. Sure appreciate you rereading the ones of mine you faved!!
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Date: 5/8/2011 8:52:00 PM
ohhh, this is a real cute one, Kash!! Were you just another birdie there with them? Hope you were not the worm. heehee. How wonderful to see you trying the new forms like the pantoum. Great job with this one, and I'll see ya later!!
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