Kash Poet Poet Pantoum

A Picnic In a Bird's Nest

A picnic in a bird's 
nest
cradled by the branch of a 
tree,
under the shade of green 
foliage
among birds in a picnic 
spree!

Cradled by the branch of a 
tree
sitting in the warmth of 
velvet nest,
among birds in a picnic 
spree
feeling lucky to be their 
guest!

Sitting in the warmth of 
velvet nest
listening to their sweet 
song,
feeling lucky to be their 
guest
among them for a whole 
day long!

Listening to their sweet 
song
dancing with them a little 
bit,
among them for a whole 
day long
enjoying their homely 
treat!

Dancing with them a little 
bit
sharing their joy and grief,
enjoying their homely 
treat
it is sure a grand picnic!

Sharing their joy and grief
under the shade of green 
foliage,
it is sure a grand picnic
a picnic in a bird's nest!



© 2011 kashinath 
karmakar (8th May 2011)
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S.Jagathsimhan Nair May 30, 2013 at 6:51 AM Congrats, Kash, on the win with this lovely write!!

Joyce Johnson May 29, 2013 at 7:48 PM I saw this coming up in my reading and could hardly wait. What fun. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 29, 2013 at 1:15 PM Congrats on your win. AO

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2013 at 12:59 AM it's always nice to see you showcased again with sweet poems like this one! congrats, Kash.

Poet Destroyer A May 28, 2013 at 8:56 PM Kash. Congratulations, with your awesome poem. Goodnight~LINDA

Andrea Dietrich May 20, 2011 at 11:28 PM Yours was quite unique, my friend. Congrats on the HM!

Carolyn Devonshire May 19, 2011 at 10:04 AM Dear Kash, Congratulations on your success in Carol's Picnic Contest! Love, Carolyn

Gautami Phookan May 19, 2011 at 10:01 AM This is a fine piece of poetry on picnic,a picnic with the birds... Congrats kashi on you win..gautami

Don Johnson May 18, 2011 at 11:30 PM Great work mate... to be amongst the birdies to share their leafy limb would put a smile on him good one mate Don

John Freeman May 18, 2011 at 6:05 PM Kashinath, so great to see you Honorably Mentioned with this great one. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses

Gwendolen Song May 18, 2011 at 12:03 PM Hi Kash The one description I like the most in this poem is the velvet nest-I have seeeeen many nests as a kiddo growing up beside a large wooded area...velvet is a great way to describe the contents of their little abode. Congrats on this win. Gwendolen

Joyce Johnson May 18, 2011 at 11:53 AM This is lovely. Worthy of a higher placement. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Nette Onclaud May 18, 2011 at 8:10 AM extraordinary theme, kashi...super cheers for the fine win! :) huggs

Ralph Taylor May 18, 2011 at 7:46 AM Congrats on your win, Kashinath. Nice going. Ralph

Jack Horne May 18, 2011 at 7:24 AM Many congrats on your win, Kash : )

Dr.Ram Mehta May 18, 2011 at 7:10 AM My congratulations on this HM win in the contest of carol, kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 18, 2011 at 5:16 AM Congrats Kash on your HM in the picnic contest with this delightful write so charismatic luv..enjoy your special honor .. bravo ...

Carol Sunshine Brown May 18, 2011 at 4:59 AM Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song May 14, 2011 at 6:58 PM A poetess is simply a female poet. :) Thanks for visiting my poetry corner, Kashinath and commenting on the Checkered Laboratory. I am just a big kid, that's all. Smiles. Gwendolen

Zzzzz Zzzzz May 11, 2011 at 11:53 AM Amusing and clever write. Good luck in the contest. Regards, Robert.

Gwendolen Song May 10, 2011 at 8:13 AM uh OH! This is an intriguing twist to the traditional picnic! The birds are probably havin way more fun than their human counterparts! Fun stuff here. Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud May 9, 2011 at 10:14 AM jeepers critters, kashi... what a different kind of picnic.. just gave me an idea! you;re in grreeeat shape! winning wishes to you.. my pages miss ya! :) huggs, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta May 9, 2011 at 6:34 AM I hope enjoying the holidays and this is outcome , a beautiful and lovely theme to ponder over, kashinath

Andrea Dietrich May 8, 2011 at 8:53 PM ps. Sure appreciate you rereading the ones of mine you faved!!

Andrea Dietrich May 8, 2011 at 8:52 PM ohhh, this is a real cute one, Kash!! Were you just another birdie there with them? Hope you were not the worm. heehee. How wonderful to see you trying the new forms like the pantoum. Great job with this one, and I'll see ya later!!

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