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A Photo Not Thrown Away

inside a frozen minute you wait the door ajar as if to capture the faintest echo of footfall the mirror scrutinizing that empty space beside you on the couch my reflection endlessly snared in mute counterpoint 03/22/18

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Date: 4/4/2018 11:47:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Deborah.
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Date: 4/1/2018 10:43:00 AM
I found this to be a wonderfully unique take on the them Deborah. Well conceived and well written. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 3/1/2018 7:14:00 PM
I like what Line said, hauntingly implied scenario. Shown not told.
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Date: 3/1/2018 2:44:00 PM
What a beautiful haunting implied scenario. Delightfully hazy. Well done, Deborah.
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