Robert Pettit Poet Sedoka

A Philly Cheesesteak

 
A Philly cheesesteak
on a long Italian roll
would be very nice right now.
I want fried onions,
and give me hot peppers too.
At the moment, I’m hungry!

Robert Pettit for Russell Sivey's "Sedoka Me Any Subject" contest
 

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Poet Destroyer A March 2, 2012 at 8:57 PM ROBERT... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd

Sara Kendrick March 1, 2012 at 2:29 PM Enjoyed reading your thoughts about food..Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Kim Merryman February 29, 2012 at 7:22 PM Sounds delicious. Congrats on your win, Robert! Love, Kim

Christopher Bunton February 29, 2012 at 5:08 PM Congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown February 29, 2012 at 7:18 AM Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Sedoka Me Any Subject" contest Robert. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels February 29, 2012 at 6:00 AM Where is mine Robert :) hehe, congratulations on your win!! Wilma

Kash Poet February 29, 2012 at 1:44 AM Very effectively you have described how hungry you were,Robert.Congrats on your win.

Nette Onclaud February 28, 2012 at 10:24 PM a spicy treat, robert... congrats with lotsa hugggs! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 28, 2012 at 7:04 PM congrats Robert on a dynamic win for this yummy Sedoka.. Philly cheesesteaks are still the best ..though I am a Vegan.. y sons luv them and still drive over the bridge to eat them ..onions and all.. either Geno's or Pat's .. both delish...

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 21, 2012 at 7:36 PM A good one Robert! Let your stomach be the guide. I enjoyed reading. Rhonda :)

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2012 at 6:54 PM oh, I really like this one, Robert. it's about FOOD and good food at that!!! (your poem is saying unsupported code at the bottom, I think you maybe for the way you finished your centering?) Robert Pettit February 21, 2012 at 8:21 PM I mistakenly placed a capital "I" at the bottom where I should have used a lower case "i".