A Perfect Place I Knew

Arabella’s 18th birthday
Darling granddaughter of mine
A special treat
A unique ‘do’
A celebration for just us two
At a perfect place I knew

Board a train to the metropolis
hail a cab through London’s streets
we approach our destination
and our excitement soars
With a welcome smile
he gently opens up our taxi doors
and thrilled to bits to hear him say
“Good morning ladies ~ welcome to the Ritz”

Luggage discreetly whisked away
by a smartly dressed porter
with a boyish grin
We ascend marble steps
through revolving doors
to a world of sumptuous luxury
full of stylish glitz 
We have now arrived 
We are inside The Ritz

Michael de Cova ~ Head Concierge
his endearing smile
and friendly demeanour
offers his hand
as he welcomes us both
to our overnight stay
on this very special day
here to celebrate 
Arabella's 18th birthday

As we open the door
to our luxurious rooms
dressed in blue and cream décor
in stylish splendour we are swathed
Pink marble in our bathroom
splendid luxury pervades
Our rooms go truly far beyond
even our wildest dreams
and as our eyes soon realise
all needs are met it seems
A birthday card
A birthday cake
A box of matches too
to light the candle on her cake
these personal touches
her day they make
Whilst cooling in silver
and packed tight with ice
our glass flutes are filled
bubbles feeling so nice
As we raise a glass
filled with Ritz Champagne
With laughter and joy
so glad that we came

Both dressed to impress
she wore her emerald green dress
at the Palm Court Restaurant
laid for afternoon tea
in the iconic hotel Ritz
‘Tis Arabella Rose and Me
   
Whilst enjoying every mouthful
we hear sounds of music floating by
For sitting at a grand piano
in white tuxedo and black bow tie
A man named Ian brings keys to life
exquisite fingers make them sing
the music he plays will always bring
a smile ~ a dance ~ a memory
with his expertise and talent 
and the twinkle in his eyes
for Ian’s love of music
truly cannot be disguised
And for twenty years or more
He plays the songs that folk adore

Each and every person
within the Ritz hotel
their aim it seems
to make your stay
beyond your wildest dreams
For they love the Ritz
as much as I
it’s in their face
it's in their eyes
So thank you one and all
We both truly had a ball
sending love
sending thanks
as we plan a future trip
hope to see you all again
maybe sometime in the Fall…

Inspired by our wonderful stay at The Ritz 19th – 20th August 2019

A BRIAN STRAND YOUR CHOICE Contest 
Sponsor Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/4/2021 7:39:00 PM
Sounds like an amazing way to celebrate your granddaughter's birthday, Ann. You described the glitz and glamor well! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/7/2021 9:29:00 AM
Many thanks Kim, yes it was truly wonderful and a visit we will never forget... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/3/2021 8:02:00 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations on your win!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/4/2021 12:51:00 AM
Thank you dear Christuraj for your welcome words. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/28/2019 4:52:00 AM
Such beautiful memories for you and Arabella. I knew you'd have the time of your lives and for the emerald green dress to be enjoying it all too. Fabulous Ann. xxx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/28/2019 4:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Elizabeth for your lovely comments and yes it was wonderful and those memories will be with us forever! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/25/2019 7:20:00 AM
I imagine this is a memory that will last Arabella Rose and you all the rest of your lives! I took my 16 year old daughter to the Romantic Writers of America Conference for two days and we met her favorite romantic writer! She is 47, and still talks of it fondly and happily!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/25/2019 7:30:00 AM
Yes I know we will Caren, the whole experience was fabulous as if we were in another era, another world. How wonderful for your 16year old daughter! Thanks for your visit dear Caren. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/24/2019 3:31:00 PM
Perfect place and a perfect gift..splendid lifetime memories you created Ann, for you and Arabella. This poem is even a greater present as she will read it again and again..there is so much gleam..so much joy..so much love..so much hospitality..your words always evoke kindness..kudos for this special write.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/24/2019 5:45:00 PM
Wow dearest Vijay your words are too kind - thank you so much. We had the most beautiful time together and I will cherish this precious memory and hold it close to my heart. My poem was rather long, but there was just so much I wanted to express, haha. Thank you again dear friend for your wonderful comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/24/2019 11:19:00 AM
Golly, Anne. You have a knack for touching the beautiful. What an outstanding poet you are. I love hearts in poetry..it makes reading you a joy Panagiota
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/24/2019 11:24:00 AM
Oh sweet Panagiota you always say the nicest things - thank you dear friend. As you can see we had the most wonderful time together with so many memories to cherish. I hope you too are having a lovely day dear Panagiota. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/24/2019 10:29:00 AM
I had a feeling the experience would result in a poem. I'm glad you all had a fantastic time Ann. Saw the Christmas preparations for the Ritz on TV. Wow what a place. Belated birthday wishes to Arabella. What a fantastic memory for you all. Tomk
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 8/24/2019 3:04:00 PM
Yes we had it too Ann, dead heat, last blast before autumn. Off to forest of dean tomorrow, it should be nice and cool.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/24/2019 11:19:00 AM
Yes and a rather long poem too! It was just fabulous and seeing the wonderful characters that we saw on the TV made it even more special. In fact after seeing the Christmas preparations I booked a Christmas afternoon tea for Arabella and me, although she does not know yet, and apart from a more christmassy menu, there will also be Carol singers and champagne. So another treat to look forward to. Are you experiencing this extreme heat today Tom? I have just been out with a friend and it feels like an oven out there, so could do with a little sea breeze, but despite the heat it is glorious, so I hope you are having it too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 8/24/2019 7:47:00 AM
And what a wonderful stay it was...you completely enjoyed it and expressed it with every word in your poem...Well done
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Date: 8/24/2019 7:55:00 AM
Yes Arturo, it was truly wonderful and we have those treasured memories forever. Arabella wore my emerald green dress (my poem) which brought tears of joy and emotion to my eyes! I am still on a high as you can see. Thanking you so much Arturo for your lovely comments and have a beautiful weekend dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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