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"A Perfect Murder Scene" underneath the gun metal clouds two bodies imprinted splayed bookmarked at the waterline uncannily close distance would never separate that twin set the ocean of tears washing over them lachrymose the day was extraordinarily ordinary yet the unanticipated came rushing in surprising two lives captured, seemingly drowned carried away on the rip, ripped apart, far from shore thrown for the risk of running away from it all eventually like double dice the Ocean like a roiling bitter life spits them both back out, not wanting them, they are the gamble rolled back in on the wake, washed clean like a scene wound backwards scratched and mottled, 8mm frame slow motion the prostrate dead they rise like ghosts wound up, holding hands walking backwards up the sand dunes not a care in the world the guns in the clouds all gone the sun now shining reversing down the path, hand in hand, an old movie to who knows where smiles wide and laughing, hand in hand the woman and child out of frame, in the margin unseen, the murderer plays his shot all over again, he loves his bad dream Candide Diderot. ‘24 “Because it was regular film, it was Light sensitive. You had to be very careful when loading and unloading the cartridge.” scene. seen.

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Date: 5/24/2024 4:47:00 AM
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Date: 5/24/2024 4:47:00 AM
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