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A Perfect Circle

Calm eyes, steady hands, I join my palms and pray, Where am I, who are you, Please make everything ok. Two feet on the ground, thru dust and dirt I travel. People, thoughts, Illusions, my existence to unravel. So many forms of different speech, to each other we are one, Feelings of spiritual goodness, under the same bright sun. Cultural tools we carry, souls dance forward in time, Connecting thru our goodness, detours evils relentless sublime. Be careful what you give or better what you do, A portrayal of one’s existence, a test signifying you. Date: 09-22-2016

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Date: 10/16/2016 2:00:00 PM
Chelcie, this is a beautiful poem.Very well written.
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Date: 10/4/2016 7:06:00 AM
lovely poem Chelcie...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/4/2016 2:44:00 PM
Thank you sweet Laura!! ( :
Date: 10/3/2016 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Chelcie. Janice
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/3/2016 7:59:00 PM
Thank you Janice!! ( :
Date: 10/3/2016 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations, Chelcie! Lovely! ...Fran
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 10/3/2016 12:55:00 PM
Thank you so much Fran!! ( :
Date: 9/29/2016 9:51:00 AM
i like this poem
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/29/2016 12:50:00 PM
Thank You Umeikia!!! ( :
Date: 9/28/2016 7:24:00 PM
This is so good. I like the way of ur presentation.Enjoyed...........//hugs//manmath......
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/28/2016 10:20:00 PM
Thank you very much!! ( : Hugs!! ( :
Date: 9/25/2016 11:55:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem very much. Well said!I rated you 7
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Chelcie Darling
Date: 9/25/2016 12:10:00 PM
Thank you Darlene! I appreciate that, so happy you liked it!! ( :

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