A Perfect Circle

Calm eyes, steady hands, I join my palms and pray,
	Where am I, who are you, Please make everything ok. 
Two feet on the ground, thru dust and dirt I travel.
	People, thoughts, Illusions, my existence to unravel.
So many forms of different speech, to each other we are one,
	Feelings of spiritual goodness, under the same bright sun.
Cultural tools we carry, souls dance forward in time,
	Connecting thru our goodness, detours evils relentless sublime.
Be careful what you give or better what you do,
	A portrayal of one’s existence, a test signifying you.



Date: 09-22-2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:00 PM
Chelcie, this is a beautiful poem.Very well written.
Scars Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 7:06 AM
lovely poem Chelcie...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Darling Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Thank you sweet Laura!! ( :
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October 3, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations on your win, Chelcie. Janice
Darling Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 7:59 PM
Thank you Janice!! ( :
Grasso Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Congratulations, Chelcie! Lovely! ...Fran
Darling Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Thank you so much Fran!! ( :
Whiting Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 9:51 AM
i like this poem
Darling Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 12:50 PM
Thank You Umeikia!!! ( :
Dalei Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 7:24 PM
This is so good. I like the way of ur presentation.Enjoyed...........//hugs//manmath......
Darling Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 10:20 PM
Thank you very much!! ( : Hugs!! ( :
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 11:55 AM
I enjoyed your poem very much. Well said!I rated you 7
Darling Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Thank you Darlene! I appreciate that, so happy you liked it!! ( :
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