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A Penny For Your Thoughts

“I don't really wanna know what makes you leave, or when you'll be back. I just wanna know what will make me cry at your arrival.” ? Ade Santi Was a cold and dismal night, you strode out Why did your mind choose such a time to leave What was so important, you had no doubt This was the now, you so strongly believed. Our life was on an even plateau, yes boring at times, did we see each other. Familiarity breeds hope I guess Yet did not look and we did not bother. Yet on your return how will I behave Welcome home, or ask you why have you come Do I want to cry, beg you like a slave Or turn the other cheek, what's done is done I bury my thoughts too raw to expose As I buried the love, under my nose Penned 17 March 2015

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Date: 3/26/2015 2:20:00 PM
This one was a unique topic based on the theme of deep thought..Thanks for participating in my contest and visiting my blog..Sara
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/7/2015 11:02:00 PM
Thank you Sara for placing my poem......Seren
Date: 3/25/2015 7:13:00 PM
That would seem to one expensive penny. congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 3/24/2015 7:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this strong and very expressive write! A7 and know that life carries on even when we are heart broken and feel rejected. I've been there, done that far too many times when a younger man ..
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Date: 3/24/2015 3:39:00 PM
Very powerful and emotional, Seren. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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Date: 3/24/2015 9:03:00 AM
Beautiful n emotive write Seren! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 3/24/2015 8:39:00 AM
Beautiful piece Seren. Congrats
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Date: 3/22/2015 4:08:00 PM
This is so deep and sentimental ,Serena.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/23/2015 1:30:00 AM
Thank u Charmaine for stopping by....Seren
Date: 3/22/2015 7:24:00 AM
Do you have enough comments yet because my fingers are getting really sore. Well finger actually, I only use one to type. Not to say, you're not my type because you are. I just hope...well that's it I have no follow up to that comment. I just hope...period. Nothing else to say. Love you! Ta Ta!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/23/2015 1:31:00 AM
Your a ninny. Maurice, thank you so much....Seren
Date: 3/22/2015 7:20:00 AM
You know I have some new poems you might want to read especially my latest post. It is doing quite well as far as quality of comment although it could use a bit more quantity.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/23/2015 1:32:00 AM
Your poems are great have read and enjoyed them..Seren
Date: 3/22/2015 7:16:00 AM
You know I am here anyways why don't I fav this little gem.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/23/2015 1:31:00 AM
Lol. Thank you
Date: 3/22/2015 7:15:00 AM
Did my last comment have an echo in it? Why does it read "A pound for for..."?
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Date: 3/22/2015 7:13:00 AM
Maybe a penny for your thoughts is too cheap for anyone to comment. Try upping the pay out to a pound for for your thoughts,
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Date: 3/22/2015 7:11:00 AM
This could be like the vacuum cleaner of all poetry. It just sucks up any comments made leaving the trail clean.
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Date: 3/22/2015 7:09:00 AM
I will have to check later to make sure my comment is still here.
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Date: 3/22/2015 7:08:00 AM
The irony is that I was convinced I commented on this one.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/23/2015 1:33:00 AM
No but you have now....thanks ....Seren

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