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A Penny For Your Thoughts

May I kiss you in the dark? May I fondle your lovely heart If your mind would kiss my soul If you cared, I would hold you so I am discarded, this I see I am yesterdays shattered debris You smile and tossed me away like a penny I hoped inside, I could purchase your thoughts In the dark, I kiss my dreams My pockets bear, of material grief For I have nothing, nothing at all to offer If in my heart, I don’t have you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/10/2014 9:06:00 PM
Oh my I really enjoyed this one, I dig the first stanza a lot, fell bad for ya by the second, wanted to hug you by the third.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/10/2014 10:50:00 PM
Wow my devilish plot worked then!!!!! thanks so much!!!
Date: 4/21/2014 4:08:00 AM
When someone rejects what you offer let it be.. Don't force yourself especially if you have exerted efforts to let that someone know your intentions.. Let it go no matter how painful it is.. For every ounce of letting go comes a brighter hope for something.. The prose it's a sad one but it's nice, olive eloisa here
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:51:00 PM
Thanks for such beautiful words of wisdom! One day I will tell you a scotish expression on the topic!!
Date: 4/20/2014 5:46:00 PM
Arthur; Don't be sad. We've been there and now we are back. We know that we can't please everyone - we have to please ourselves. Smile Jesus loves you... Lcy
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:51:00 PM
Thanks, I Just want my penny back!!!!! :)
Date: 4/19/2014 11:07:00 AM
Dear Arthur, Those who "toss" us away have to be put behind us so we can enjoy the rest of our lives. A hard-learned lesson that comes from reading your sad, but well-penned poem. Love and blessings for a happy Easter weekend, Carolyn
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:52:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words!!
Date: 4/19/2014 8:11:00 AM
This is sad, her love vanished like the Canadian penny. Well told story Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:53:00 PM
Yes I will miss the Canadian penny!!!!! LOL
Date: 4/19/2014 5:30:00 AM
Ahh!! A lovely love note for the one that you love..Enjoyed reading this sentimental work this morning..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:54:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 4/19/2014 3:50:00 AM
So sweet and sad. Great write.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/22/2014 9:55:00 PM
I appreciate your kind words A.E.

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