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A


Saying that's been around forever

Where it came from I haven't a clue

There's many phrases just like this one

So familiar to both me and you


PENNY


Is a word not heard much these days

Its value's much less than a cent

We'd used to get a big bag full of candy

At the store it was a big event


FOR


Many years its value has decreased

There's a rumour they'll not longer exist

Where's this technological age leading us

The good old days I so dearly miss


YOUR


Thoughts are surely, what an old geezer

He can't keep up with the times

But us old guys lived a much simpler life

For those good old days I still pine


THOUGHTS


Of sodas, ice cream and lollipops

Linger in the depth of my being

Tears can be seen trickling down my cheek

A sad but so joyous a feeling


©Jack Ellison 2012



A poetic style I call CONNECTIVE QUATRAIN HEADERS

Many thanks to Connie Marcum Wong for her help and inspiration.

A Saying that's been around forever Where it came from I haven't a clue There's many phrases just like this one So familiar to both me and you PENNY Is a word not heard much these days Its value's much less than a cent We used to get a big bag full of candy At the store it was a big event FOR Many years its value has decreased There's a rumour they'll not longer exist Where's this technological age leading us The good old days I so dearly miss YOUR Thoughts are probably, what an old geezer He can't keep up with the times But us old guys lived a much simpler life For those good old days we still pine THOUGHTS Of sodas, ice cream and lollipops Linger in the depth of our being Tears can be seen trickling down our cheeks A sad but so joyous a feeling ©Jack Ellison 2012 A poetic style I call CONNECTIVE QUATRAIN HEADERS Many thanks to Connie Marcum Wong for her help and inspiration.

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Date: 3/17/2018 2:32:00 AM
I like this format of poetry - you do it very well! "sodas, ice cream and lollipops Linger in the depth of our being" Lovely lines...Always, Laura
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Date: 3/17/2018 6:19:00 AM
Thank you, dear Laura... should do more like this!!! XOX
Date: 10/10/2012 6:20:00 AM
Well done Jack , this is wonderful ,full of memories for a lot of people. Our penny is about to be gone too.Anne
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Jack Ellison
Date: 10/10/2012 6:26:00 AM
Thank you dear friend for your kind response! "A penny for your thought"... better save 'em before they ain't no more! Hugs, happy thoughts and much love, Jack
Date: 9/20/2012 2:43:00 PM
I so remember penny candy back in the 60's ,,, 7 kids in my family, she told me back in her day as a kid $5.00 could feed you for a month,,,, you have a blessed day Jack ;}
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/20/2012 2:49:00 PM
Our first trip to the grocery store after getting married in 1957, cost us $7.00 and it was enough for a week!!! Love and huge hugs, Jack xox
Date: 9/17/2012 9:50:00 AM
I find this type of poem very intriguing to read. Well done nostalgia piece. Touching.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/17/2012 9:59:00 AM
Good morning and thank you dear Carol for your kind comments once again! Have a super duper day... Jack xox
Date: 9/17/2012 6:39:00 AM
It's a delight to read your poems!
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Date: 9/17/2012 6:47:00 AM
A very nice compliment my friend... thanks you!
Date: 9/17/2012 6:38:00 AM
Love this jack!!A new form to me!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/17/2012 6:46:00 AM
Yes! Connie Wong suggested I give this form a name and write more in this format! Glad you liked it, Kash! Cheers!
Date: 9/17/2012 6:24:00 AM
Lovely Jack just like you, I may use it now I am connected again but I have so many to read xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/17/2012 6:30:00 AM
I can always count on you my dear Mandy, to make my spirits soar! Thank you friend! Love xox

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