A Pencil's Point of View

We are a jelly jar full of pencils new in town.
From Europe we came heads up, points down.
No fancy names, we shared the same woodshed
and thanked Welches jelly for this practical bed. 

Lead was a number four and fatter than all.
Trim number twos, we all awaiting the call. 
Writing and erasing, sometimes we paid
For frivolous writing the humans had made.

The sharpest point in the jar was funny ole Lead.
His weftage was smooth but his family all now dead.
Lead became smaller and smaller and in time
was nothing but a stub, when #2s were in their prime

It's unfair to be held back once you know our point of view
to trash cans we go for no reason with no expectation to sue. 
Till one day we snap and die from being tossed
A point without a pencil, life is colder than frost
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 11, 2015 at 2:52 AM
Julie :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Mehta Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 4:12 AM
Congrats Julie on big win with this 'pointed' creative one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
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January 24, 2011 at 4:50 PM
Julie, I like this personification. It stretches the readers minds and gives them something to think about. Thanks for writing it. Glad you liked my Quick, I need a Doctor.
Maverick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 1:25 PM
the lead point makes a mark, indeed Julie! good to see your placment here Today.
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January 21, 2011 at 12:22 PM
Hi Julie - Congratulations on your WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
Sweetheart Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 11:53 AM
Congrats Julie on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this excellent entry.. u sure made the point in your great lines.. enjoy your sweet success with luv..
Taylor Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 11:43 AM
Congrats, Julie. Excellent clever piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. xxxRalph
Mehta Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 10:31 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, julie
Haick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 10:27 AM
Hi Julie, Congratulations on your win in Paula's "What's the Point?" Contest! Always, Annalise
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January 21, 2011 at 9:34 AM
Congratulations on your win Julie in the "What's The Point" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
January 12, 2011 at 9:09 AM
Lovely write on the word point using so many variants, Good luck in the contest, julie
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