A Pencil Without Lead

The earth knows your business child;
there's nothing anonymous ...
about alcohol.
Them drunks like to show off ...
yes, they like to show their strength.
They beat women like bongo drums.

Them gal down at the factories,
they love a man on cannabis;
a mellow man - 
in a constant mellow mood, 
always hungry for good food 
and a good cook.

Their pencils are always sharpened, 
ready to write - 
in rain, sun, or sleet;
Not so with them funky drunks, 
theirs are more eraser and less lead.
they'll erase even wet dreams,
their pencils are nothing but dead,
carcasses for the crows.

Write love on puffs of cannabis clouds
just like Nesta Marley did.
How bloody is Mary
after glasses of your spirit poured out?
love is forever yours Mary Jane, 
my darling and consort.
A finger will never hurt thee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/24/2011 12:49:00 PM
Earle ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d
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Date: 4/24/2011 11:04:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/24/2011 7:27:00 AM
liked it very much.
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Date: 4/19/2011 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Earle. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Earle
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:19:00 AM
What a deep and meaning title with meaningful expressions with very impressive title, Earle. enjoyed it.
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Date: 11/21/2010 6:45:00 AM
Earl, for me the recipient of abuse, it is comforting to hear a man say to his woman that he would never lift a finger to hurt her. ?Excellent write! Three cheers!!! Blessings, Joy (Jew)
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Date: 11/20/2010 11:12:00 AM
clever write Earle love the ending for the mellow man,, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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Date: 11/20/2010 10:52:00 AM
cannabis ( smokes) with bloody mary together?? what a trip and what a seemingly fascinating poetic high, earle! warmest, nette
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