A Pencil Without Lead

The earth knows your business child;
there's nothing anonymous ...
about alcohol.
Them drunks like to show off ...
yes, they like to show their strength.
They beat women like bongo drums.

Them gal down at the factories,
they love a man on cannabis;
a mellow man - 
in a constant mellow mood, 
always hungry for good food 
and a good cook.

Their pencils are always sharpened, 
ready to write - 
in rain, sun, or sleet;
Not so with them funky drunks, 
theirs are more eraser and less lead.
they'll erase even wet dreams,
their pencils are nothing but dead,
carcasses for the crows.

Write love on puffs of cannabis clouds
just like Nesta Marley did.
How bloody is Mary
after glasses of your spirit poured out?
love is forever yours Mary Jane, 
my darling and consort.
A finger will never hurt thee.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 24, 2011 at 12:49 PM
Earle ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d
Fisher Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 11:04 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week Rgds Janette
Brahma Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 7:27 AM
liked it very much.
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 11:06 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Earle. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 12:58 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Earle
Mehta Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 9:19 AM
What a deep and meaning title with meaningful expressions with very impressive title, Earle. enjoyed it.
Wellington Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 6:45 AM
Earl, for me the recipient of abuse, it is comforting to hear a man say to his woman that he would never lift a finger to hurt her. ?Excellent write! Three cheers!!! Blessings, Joy (Jew)
A   Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 11:12 AM
clever write Earle love the ending for the mellow man,, enjoyed your write,..p.d.
Onclaud Avatar
November 20, 2010 at 10:52 AM
cannabis ( smokes) with bloody mary together?? what a trip and what a seemingly fascinating poetic high, earle! warmest, nette
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