A Peice of You

The sun moving down
Into a wonderful 
place
Somewhere that people
Don't dare to race
All of your laughter
that used to be yours
has been silenced 
by the closing of doors
The lights will flicker
as you will too
Then all of a 
sudden
nothing will move
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ellison Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 8:37 AM
I'm at an age that this surely hits home! Hugs, Jack xxx
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