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A PEACEFUL WORLD

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME ,(c)

A Peaceful World

If changing oneself was as easy as changing the world peace we would have already found!







(c) Demetrios Trifiatis
        13 August 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Manassian Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 5:11 AM
Yes, dear. That is so true. I sometimes wish I could change certain aspects about myself. Any clues? ;)
Trifiatis Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 7:38 AM
Keep trying! haha! First, one has to be clear of what aspects he wishes to change and for what reason. Second, has to find the right way and the right time to do it. Third, make certain that the change he is going to change will serve a higher and nobler purpose,. Fourth, coordinate his efforts with other people's efforts so as to apply the desired changes. Fifth...Thank you my dear Eileen. Happy to see you again!
Andresen Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 4:56 AM
- Not all people see their own mistakes .... but they are the first to see mistakes of others - a line we should learn from, well done - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 7:40 AM
That is very true my dear, Anne-Lise thus everyone wishes to change the world but not everyone is willing to change himself! Thank you so much for visiting!
Gupta Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 4:52 AM
Absolutely so ... In a line you say very serious facts in a poetic rhythm ... wonderful ...
Trifiatis Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 7:43 AM
I am trying my dear friend, Probir! Thank you very much!
Y. Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 3:30 AM
Hi Demetrios, This is a deep thought provoking write. You are so gifted. You manage to say a lot in few words. As always great job. A Big seven:-) Alexis
Trifiatis Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 7:44 AM
You so kind dear, Alexis. Thank you for appreciating my humble writings!
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