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A Peaceful Place

As I stare at the moon. I listen to the wave beat against the rock The wind going threw the tree. I find myself sitting in a peaceful place. A peaceful world. As I drift of into my sleep I think of how this world would be without war. Without violance. Without evil. As I dream I dream about this world of what it could be. This world I wish to be. As I wake up. I wish it was night again. So i could stare at the moon. And be peaceful once again.

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Date: 10/23/2011 7:13:00 PM
A very inspiring and heartfelt read. Thank you for sharing your poetry and please keep on writing...
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:13:00 PM
I wish for that as well. I like your poem.
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Date: 10/14/2011 8:07:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Tyler. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 10/13/2011 11:59:00 PM
Very nice...I dream and ponder those thoughts at times myself. Thank you for your poem, Ed
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Date: 10/13/2011 11:26:00 PM
oh very nice my friend
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