A Patio-Like Place

Behind my building, there’s a spot,
A patio-like place,
With iron benches, tables, too -
A lovely outdoor space.

With flow’ring bushes all around,
It’s someplace nice to sit,
Although on sunny days, I’m sure
That I would sweat a bit.

It’s open to the tenants;
From the basement, there’s a door.
The strangest thing is that I haven’t 
Been out here before.

I found it quite by accident,
But learned that it’s been here
For two-plus years and rarely used;
The reason why’s not clear.

It doesn’t have the river’s pull,
But I can sit outside 
And read or write by taking
Just an elevator ride.
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Greenhough Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 7:09 PM
I'm with you on this. A quiet, secret place can be very calming. I enjoy this write.
Borke Avatar
June 10, 2024 at 1:25 PM
My local library has a walled-in garden, but that’s open to the sky, with benches and tables. I never saw anyone in there, but imagine how cozy it would be on a windy day. When I inquired, I was told it is for staff.
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