Premiere Contest WinnerA Patchwork Pastiche

Illusions,symbols of childhood,
coloured filled swathes of painterly
hues.A  private fantasy in slow
motion suspended in space.An
abstracted blur in flashbacks of
yesteryear,caught in a daydream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Walker Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 7:07 PM
Brian, congratulations on landing first place for your iovely poem. ~ Sonia
Strand Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 3:18 AM
Thank you so much Sonia for your comment
Kimathi Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Congrats Brian, for your well, deserved first placement with this awesome piece!! ;-)
Strand Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 3:19 AM
Thanks Teddy so much for your kind words.
Onclaud Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 11:13 AM
best congrats on your top glory for this vivid image, brian... huggs
Strand Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Thank you Nette for your much valued comment
Dutta Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 1:10 AM
Congrats Brian to win top place on your nice composition.
Strand Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 3:03 AM
Thank you Anisha for your kind words.Have a good day
Sands Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Congratulations! Well done!
Strand Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 5:35 PM
Thank so much Heidi.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 5:31 PM
Lovely imagery, Brian. Congratulations on your trophy win. You deserve it.
Haight Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Lovely imagery about reliving special moments in life through a memory, Brian. Congratulations on your First Place Trophy win! Sandra
Strand Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 5:31 PM
Thank you Sandra for your much valued comments on my poem
La France Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 4:33 PM
Brian congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful poem ~
Strand Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Thank you Constance for your much valued comment
Canerdy Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 2:57 PM
A 7 for this very descriptive WINNING poem, Brian! Janice
Strand Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Thank so much for this comment Janice.
Martin Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Congrats on your win - like the use of "painterly" :-)
Strand Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 4:26 PM
Thank you Mark for your kind words
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