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A Patchwork Pastiche

Illusions,symbols of childhood, coloured filled swathes of painterly hues.A private fantasy in slow motion suspended in space.An abstracted blur in flashbacks of yesteryear,caught in a daydream.

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Sonia Walker

Date: 11/6/2016 7:07:00 PM

Brian, congratulations on landing first place for your iovely poem. ~ Sonia

Brian Strand
Date: 11/7/2016 3:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Sonia for your comment

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 11/6/2016 5:45:00 PM

Congrats Brian, for your well, deserved first placement with this awesome piece!! ;-)

Brian Strand
Date: 11/7/2016 3:19:00 AM

Thanks Teddy so much for your kind words.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/6/2016 11:13:00 AM

best congrats on your top glory for this vivid image, brian... huggs

Brian Strand
Date: 11/6/2016 11:54:00 AM

Thank you Nette for your much valued comment

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/6/2016 1:10:00 AM

Congrats Brian to win top place on your nice composition.

Brian Strand
Date: 11/6/2016 3:03:00 AM

Thank you Anisha for your kind words.Have a good day

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/5/2016 5:34:00 PM

Congratulations! Well done!

Brian Strand
Date: 11/5/2016 5:35:00 PM

Thank so much Heidi.

Janis Thompson

Date: 11/5/2016 5:31:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Brian. Congratulations on your trophy win. You deserve it.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/5/2016 4:58:00 PM

Lovely imagery about reliving special moments in life through a memory, Brian. Congratulations on your First Place Trophy win! Sandra

Brian Strand
Date: 11/5/2016 5:31:00 PM

Thank you Sandra for your much valued comments on my poem

Constance La France

Date: 11/5/2016 4:33:00 PM

Brian congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful poem ~

Brian Strand
Date: 11/5/2016 4:58:00 PM

Thank you Constance for your much valued comment

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/5/2016 2:57:00 PM

A 7 for this very descriptive WINNING poem, Brian! Janice

Brian Strand
Date: 11/5/2016 4:57:00 PM

Thank so much for this comment Janice.

Mark Martin

Date: 11/5/2016 2:30:00 PM

Congrats on your win - like the use of "painterly" :-)

Brian Strand
Date: 11/5/2016 4:26:00 PM

Thank you Mark for your kind words