A Pat On the Bum

Frequented an upscale steak house last night Served by a sweetie so charming and bright Made our evening And as we were leaving Patted her on the bum much to MY delight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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November 3, 2017 at 6:15 PM
Don't know what a hoosegow :) But it's a very clever and fun write! Enjoyed it!
Ellison Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 7:42 PM
Hoosegow is a jain cell! LOL Thanks sweetie!!! Lovesies, Jack xxx
One Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 2:58 PM
You naughty boy! Lol.
Ellison Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 3:15 PM
I'm writing from the hoosegow!!! lol
Flats Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 9:21 AM
But how was the steak, Jake?//Was it beef or was it snake?//Was it on a warm platter?//did you hear dishes scatter?//Details are frost on the cake. DEELIGHT (us) ON JACKIE BOY!!!
Ellison Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 9:34 AM
Twas DEEELICIOUS! But the sweetie of a waitress toke my mind to naughty place!!! WHOOP WHOOP!!
Sivey Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 7:12 AM
You are so naughty Jackson!! I loved your write about this delightful gesture of friendship! I hope she didn't mind that! I thought your poem was crafted wondrously, perfect rhyming and rhythm! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
Ellison Avatar
November 3, 2017 at 7:24 AM
If I had ACTUALLY patted her bum, methinks I would be writing this from the back of a paddy wagon!!! LOL
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