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A Pat On the Bum

Frequented an upscale steak house last night Served by a sweetie so charming and bright Made our evening And as we were leaving Patted her on the bum much to MY delight

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Judith S

Date: 11/3/2017 6:15:00 PM

Don't know what a hoosegow :) But it's a very clever and fun write! Enjoyed it!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/3/2017 7:42:00 PM

Hoosegow is a jain cell! LOL Thanks sweetie!!! Lovesies, Jack xxx

Silent One

Date: 11/3/2017 2:58:00 PM

You naughty boy! Lol.

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/3/2017 3:15:00 PM

I'm writing from the hoosegow!!! lol

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/3/2017 9:21:00 AM

But how was the steak, Jake?//Was it beef or was it snake?//Was it on a warm platter?//did you hear dishes scatter?//Details are frost on the cake. DEELIGHT (us) ON JACKIE BOY!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/3/2017 9:34:00 AM

Twas DEEELICIOUS! But the sweetie of a waitress toke my mind to naughty place!!! WHOOP WHOOP!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/3/2017 7:12:00 AM

You are so naughty Jackson!! I loved your write about this delightful gesture of friendship! I hope she didn't mind that! I thought your poem was crafted wondrously, perfect rhyming and rhythm! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/3/2017 7:24:00 AM

If I had ACTUALLY patted her bum, methinks I would be writing this from the back of a paddy wagon!!! LOL