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A Passionate's Cosmos

Tik-tok the clock clocked Shivered my lids , eyes were locked Night it was, but shadows formed down my eyes like a jack frost pond. Florets peeped, sang chirpy and sound Bask whispered me to get brown "But hey kigo, you make me cold, You make my passion less bold Your malicious intent won't leave me unsowed" This my endeavour denounced, so in devote, much in devote. Lean, but spirited high Bleary, it will fleet by. wonder that is around the pike(better future) Keeps me going, radiant my vibes. Yes, those disparaging thoughts mind speaks Brawn sinews still feel weak. Then greets with amity Mr. Ardor Gives me life, plays some amour. He fights my flaw, enhance my will then give me my fight, leaves the field. Now vim I am, strong I was made Will become hard, hard to personate. Wait you fellows, wait for a tale tale of a champion, tale of elate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/21/2016 11:08:00 AM
nice to see this one again. Linda
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Date: 12/24/2015 12:29:00 PM
:) MERRY CHRISTMAS
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Date: 11/3/2015 12:38:00 PM
Ayushi,, Congrats on your any poem win. SKAT <3
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Ayushi Jha
Date: 11/3/2015 12:54:00 PM
Thank you :D
Date: 11/3/2015 12:47:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win Ayushi with this amazing write!
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Ayushi Jha
Date: 11/3/2015 1:46:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 11/2/2015 11:48:00 PM
Ayushi, Congrats on the win. Enjoy my newest blog "One More Thing" if you'd like. Always ~LINDA~
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Ayushi Jha
Date: 11/3/2015 1:46:00 AM
Thanks a lot
Date: 10/28/2015 10:22:00 PM
Ayushi, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/27/2015 12:11:00 PM
Ayushi, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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