A Passionate's Cosmos

Tik-tok  the clock clocked
Shivered my lids , eyes were locked 
Night it was, but shadows formed
down my eyes like a jack frost pond.
       Florets peeped, sang chirpy and sound
Bask whispered me to get brown
"But hey kigo, you make me cold, 
You make my passion less bold
Your malicious intent won't leave me unsowed"
This my endeavour denounced, so in devote, much in devote.
        Lean, but spirited high 
Bleary, it will fleet by.
wonder that is around the pike(better future)
Keeps me going, radiant my vibes.
        Yes, those disparaging thoughts mind speaks
Brawn sinews still feel weak.
Then greets with amity Mr. Ardor
Gives me life, plays some amour.
He fights my flaw, enhance my will
 then give me my fight, leaves the field.
         Now vim I am, strong I was made
Will become hard, hard to personate.
Wait you fellows, wait for a tale
tale of a champion, tale of elate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 7:08 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 21, 2016 at 11:08 AM
nice to see this one again. Linda
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December 24, 2015 at 12:29 PM
:) MERRY CHRISTMAS
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November 3, 2015 at 12:38 PM
Ayushi,, Congrats on your any poem win. SKAT <3
Jha Avatar
November 3, 2015 at 12:54 PM
Thank you :D
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November 3, 2015 at 12:47 AM
Congrats on ur superb win Ayushi with this amazing write!
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November 3, 2015 at 1:46 AM
Thank you :)
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November 2, 2015 at 11:48 PM
Ayushi, Congrats on the win. Enjoy my newest blog "One More Thing" if you'd like. Always ~LINDA~
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November 3, 2015 at 1:46 AM
Thanks a lot
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October 28, 2015 at 10:22 PM
Ayushi, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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October 27, 2015 at 12:11 PM
Ayushi, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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