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A Passing of Clouds

Mostly it’s the shadows
prancing across the fields
in dalliance with the daisies
hopscotching about the buildings
shapeshifting amid the trees
playing hide and seek with the sun
dancing with shoeless children 
that make me marvel
at the antics
of each passing cloud

©3/5/2023

Each Passing Cloud Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/18/2023 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
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Date: 3/18/2023 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations John on your placement. A well written poem, my friend.
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Date: 3/4/2023 9:55:00 PM
That's a very nice way of looking at it. Some very good word choices as well. John
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John Lawless
Date: 3/5/2023 3:00:00 PM
thanks for stopping by to read and comment J., always appreciated

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