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A Passing of Clouds

Mostly it’s the shadows prancing across the fields in dalliance with the daisies hopscotching about the buildings shapeshifting amid the trees playing hide and seek with the sun dancing with shoeless children that make me marvel at the antics of each passing cloud ©3/5/2023 Each Passing Cloud Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/18/2023 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
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Date: 3/18/2023 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations John on your placement. A well written poem, my friend.
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Date: 3/5/2023 1:54:00 AM
This is so gently written, I love it!
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Date: 3/4/2023 9:55:00 PM
That's a very nice way of looking at it. Some very good word choices as well. John
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John Lawless
Date: 3/5/2023 3:00:00 PM
thanks for stopping by to read and comment J., always appreciated

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