A Part of Me - a Collaboration With Deb Wilson

Just a single thought,  and my heart begins to rhythmically beat
My breath gets caught, and from the start you made me feel so complete.
Such joy like I've never known, for heartache has always hindered me.
This beating beneath my breastbone beats to each stanza in my poetry.
You've awakened a love I never thought existed, and showed me so many things.
Cupids arrow flew, but i missed it, and then I stole his bowstring!
But there is no use fighting anymore, for I've given you the key.
Now you travel my hearts corridor, and you'll forever remain a part of me!!

I want you always in my heart, through every up and down.
We'll ride the storms out with our love, and I'll always be around.
You bring a sweetness to my life that I have never known.
I live to read your poetry, and hear your voice on the phone.
The angels, I know are watching us high in the sky above.
They even whispered in my ear you'd give me all your love.
Because of you I'm happy again, and I never felt so free.
I give you my body, heart, and soul, cos' you are now a part of me.


Note: I wrote 1st stanza, the lovely Deb Wilson wrote 2nd stanza.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/11/2011 9:43:00 AM
Sentimental and fun to read, Jimmy. You and DEb are a talented duo. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/7/2011 10:52:00 AM
Awesome collab, JAM and Deb! Good job. Love, Annalise
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