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Small babies are unpredictable just like the weather Often wet; with sudden outbreaks of terrible wind But would I have altered anything, no never … Being a parent, you become very thick skinned! Contest: Grook Sponsor: Silent One 02~14~16

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Date: 2/21/2016 8:40:00 AM
Brilliant! You are the imacculate poet. I absolutely adore this write, a huge fav!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/21/2016 10:24:00 AM
aww thanks :-) I love writing with humour and have never tried a grook before:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/18/2016 10:06:00 PM
LOL! Jan tusi great ho! I think you can understand what I said. Love U Babe, Bobby xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/19/2016 3:58:00 AM
Thanks Bobby:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/18/2016 7:26:00 AM
Ha ha, great win!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/18/2016 9:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Richard:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2016 11:21:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Jan.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/18/2016 9:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2016 1:38:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your Win. Yahooo!!!!!
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Date: 2/18/2016 9:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2016 9:50:00 AM
Jan, Congrats on your Grook win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/18/2016 9:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2016 9:39:00 AM
Congrats on a great win Jan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/18/2016 9:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2016 8:37:00 AM
worthy of a high win, jan.. congrats and huggs!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/18/2016 9:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2016 7:42:00 AM
Great analogy, and so true, Jan. 8PD Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2016 8:14:00 AM
Many thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2016 2:02:00 AM
Congratulations!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/17/2016 4:22:00 AM
Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/17/2016 1:09:00 AM
excellent grook there, and nice use of words, best of luck Jan
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Date: 2/17/2016 4:22:00 AM
Thanks White sage:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2016 6:31:00 PM
funny words leading to winning ways..a job well done, Jan. congrats!
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Date: 2/17/2016 4:21:00 AM
Thanks Sam:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2016 5:18:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your high marks with this grook. What really stole the show for me was your second line --- not only endearing, but really funny! I will never think of baby farts in the same way again... lol.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/16/2016 5:22:00 PM
Oh I'm glad you liked the humour here Timothy and i loved your comment lol.... I have never written one of these before so I was delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2016 3:47:00 PM
awesome, Jan. You GOT the GROOK. I'm glad we got to share a high spot together!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/16/2016 4:06:00 PM
Thanks Andrea I was delighted to place as I wasn't sure what was expected - went for humour and it paid off ... phewwwwwwwwwww lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2016 3:37:00 PM
This is very creative, fits in nicely with what this form asks for....and I love the humour that goes with it! Congratulations on your podium finish! Hugs // paul
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Date: 2/16/2016 4:07:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul i was dleighted to place well with my first attempt at this form:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2016 11:38:00 AM
I can see in your poems you are missing your baby boy . great write B-)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/16/2016 4:09:00 PM
I loved every minute of my time with my son when he was growing up Eve now he has flown the nest I am delighted to see him flourish:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/16/2016 11:11:00 AM
You are the most clever poet on PS, you should be very proud of yourself :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 2/16/2016 4:11:00 PM
Oh Luloo that is too kind a comment ... I am in awe of so many wonderful people here and without their support I would never have learned so much and be flying high with my creativity:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/15/2016 8:24:00 PM
Oh How funny...the graphic is priceless. I left it too long to enter mine. It filled up quickly. Good Luck with yours. SuZ
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/16/2016 1:19:00 AM
Thanks Suz:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/15/2016 6:21:00 PM
A great poem....and a perfect metaphor.
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Date: 2/16/2016 1:19:00 AM
Thanks David:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/15/2016 12:23:00 AM
Jan ... this was a real treat to read in a-midst all the other grooks I've read. A real lighthearted touch. I won't say anything more as I'm acting as co-judge ... anything can happen :) Appreciate your recent visits!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/15/2016 1:31:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Timothy It is my first attempt at this style - thought I would have fun:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/14/2016 9:16:00 PM
LOL Hilarious but so true, behind such great humor there lies the kindest of hearts!
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Date: 2/15/2016 1:29:00 PM
Thanks Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/14/2016 1:17:00 PM
How true...I enjoyed the read and the memories. BG
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Date: 2/14/2016 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Barbara - oh how fast the years fly by but we still have 'nappy' memories lol !:-) hugs jan xxx
Date: 2/14/2016 12:43:00 PM
Superb Jan! You hit the nail on the head with you description... as you say, we MUST be thick skinned!! Well done!!! Keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 2/14/2016 12:47:00 PM
I enjoyed it!!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/14/2016 12:45:00 PM
We are Keith lol but I wouldn't have changed a second when my son was a baby. Not sure if this is a 'grook' but I had fun writing it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/14/2016 12:31:00 PM
You are right. I would have never changed anything either...albeit a few nasty diapers...lol
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/14/2016 12:32:00 PM
I wouldn't have changed a second Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/14/2016 9:02:00 AM
Great job! I'm still thinking on this one. For a second, I thought this was going to be about what can happen when changing a boy baby! Good luck and all the best ... CayCay
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/14/2016 10:01:00 AM
I have never written a 'grook' so hope this is ok:-) hugs jan xx
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