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A Papered Peace

Pitiful little Japanese girl. Cancer victim after HIroshima. Some would call her naive. She died while making paper cranes to show her faith in life. Short of her goal of one thousand, she led the way. A million origami folders followed her and made the goal. And peace came....didn't it? It took some time to make the cranes. And longer still to bring the peace. But it came. Surely it came. It had to. It was worthwhile, wasn't it, when there was no killing anymore? Wasn't it? ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/30/2012 3:01:00 PM
Yes... very touching, and direct in your expressions on this piece. I really enjoyed reading this heartfelt, yet the style of your writing is quite in the exceelnce always I have very well noticed from what I have read thus far. Always a pleasure to read your work. Sincerely, Cindy Lu :)
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Robert Ludden
Date: 10/30/2012 3:06:00 PM
i AM ALWAYS SO VERY GRATEFUL to those of you who seek out my writing
Date: 10/30/2012 9:01:00 AM
very well-written and surely something to think about...
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Robert Ludden
Date: 10/30/2012 9:31:00 AM
I hope so. Thank you so much.

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