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A Painting On Curved Glass

My view from the balcony paints the sky cobalt blue Unaware of the maple tree that ferociously swings Quivering its shadows at the behest of gusty winds As fluttering green leaves filter gilded rays through As clouds move in, evening calls out the golden sun For forfeiting its reign of the vibrant orange horizon When pitter-patter's heard in blooming rose garden Emanating petrichor from fragrance of summer fun When the fleeting storm moves on it's all over soon As faded light emerges from somber eyes of dark The sky now resembles a painting on curved glass-- Periwinkle on tangerine runes enticing bashful moon June 1, 2018 Placed 3rd: Standard contest 400 by Brian Strand

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Valsa George

Date: 1/13/2022 3:46:00 AM

You are a Wordsmith ! A windy evening and the shadows of a maple tree have aroused in you such picturesque visions that those who read this poem see a painting etched in curved glass....

Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/9/2020 5:11:00 PM

A beautiful write, Vijay. My favorite line. "The sky now resembles a painting on curved glass" :)

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 6/13/2019 12:28:00 PM

Where do these words come from Vijay??? Excellent!!!! Congratulations on your win :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2019 2:37:00 PM

These words came from the view..from my balcony. Much appreciate your kind remarks..many thanks, Swetha.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/8/2019 8:26:00 AM

Your colourful imagery is captivating, Vijay. Congratulations on your contest win.Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/10/2019 8:21:00 AM

Thank you Paul.

Charles Messina

Date: 6/6/2019 11:17:00 PM

Wonderful imagery to this very well written poem, Vijay. Terrific write my friend! ~Charlie

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/7/2019 2:56:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Charles--many thanks.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 6/6/2019 7:48:00 AM

Wow!!! So beautiful, Vijay... Lovely imagery... Such a beautiful scene and I could see that through your words... Thanks for sharing this wonderful poetry... Congratulations on your well deserved win...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/7/2019 2:55:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, Supraja..many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/5/2019 10:27:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay, on this win! Your words paint a smile upon my face. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/7/2019 2:55:00 PM

Thanks for the return visit..much appreciate, Brandy--many thanks.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 6/5/2019 10:35:00 AM

Outstanding imagery is always one of your strong suits, Vijay, this piece has it in buckets.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/5/2019 3:06:00 PM

Thank you my friend..much appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/5/2019 9:46:00 AM

One of your best, my dear friend! So lovely!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/5/2019 3:06:00 PM

Much appreciate the kind feedback, Kim--many thanks.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/5/2019 7:18:00 AM

absolutely exquisite imagery and I adore your use of colour Vijay, I'd have given this a top place!!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/5/2019 3:05:00 PM

Thank you Jan..so appreciate your visit and comments..you are very kind.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/4/2019 4:24:00 PM

Your poem painted a beautiful scene with the aid of Nature, My compliments, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/5/2019 7:07:00 AM

Much appreciate Ralph..many thanks.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian

Date: 6/3/2019 8:02:00 PM

reign of the vibrant orange horizon... orange reigns in Queenly fashion...your use of color i enjoy...congrats!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/4/2019 7:46:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, Barbara..many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/3/2019 10:01:00 AM

Phantasmagorical painting that puts Rebrand to shame my friend, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/4/2019 7:45:00 AM

Thank you my friend..appreciate your visit and comments, as always.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 6/3/2019 7:22:00 AM

So rich in imagery.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/3/2019 8:03:00 AM

Much appreciate Allen..many thanks.

Joseph May

Date: 6/2/2019 8:59:00 PM

Beautifully written Vijay...Love the ending lines..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/3/2019 8:02:00 AM

Thank you Joseph for the visit and comments..many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/2/2019 6:20:00 PM

The sky now resembles a painting on curved glass-- your lines are getting more and more original. It doesn't get better then this xo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/3/2019 8:02:00 AM

Much appreciate Pixie..many thanks.

Silent One

Date: 6/2/2019 7:20:00 AM

Love the colours in this one Vijay.. You really did paint a picture with your words..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2019 4:57:00 PM

You are so very kind, SO--much appreciate..many thanks.

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/2/2019 6:44:00 AM

Your vivid imagery never disappoints Vijay!! I can so easily visualize the incredible skies that you see. Beautiful!! Happy Sunday !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2019 4:56:00 PM

Happy Sunday to you as well, Mike. Haven't seen much of your work lately. Much appreciate the kind feedback..many thanks.

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/2/2019 12:19:00 AM

Winds, rains, storms, to let us know of its contrast would be--nice Vijay, Aloha William

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2019 4:54:00 PM

Much appreciate William..many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/1/2019 10:32:00 PM

Nature splashes color upon everything. It's beautiful and found in all seasons. I love the kaleidoscope of moments you allow to drip from your golden pen. :) A Favorite for me. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2019 4:54:00 PM

You are right--so much color and beauty in nature..appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks, Brandy. And a special thank you for the FAV.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/1/2019 8:15:00 PM

Absolutely heavenly, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2019 4:52:00 PM

Thank you for the kind remarks..appreciate as always, Janice.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/1/2019 7:18:00 PM

This is wonderful beyond mere words. I am speechless, Vitay Panagiota xoxo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2019 4:52:00 PM

You are so very kind..much appreciate Panagiota..many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/1/2019 6:05:00 PM

Oh my Vijay...this is just exquisite and is sure to be a top winner in the contest! Your imagery pops out in glorious colors! Congratulations with your podium win in Brian's contest. I loved this beauty! : ) xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2019 4:51:00 PM

So kind of you Connie! Always happy to read your feedback..much appreciate..many thanks.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/1/2019 4:26:00 PM

vibrant words painted on a lovely sky-canvas, vijay...i enjoyed this one!...huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2019 4:50:00 PM

Much appreciate, Nette..many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2019 3:14:00 PM

- Gorgeous views, Vijay ... a wonderful title ... "A painting on curved glass" a firework of colors ... beautiful :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2019 4:49:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise..always enjoy reading your thoughts..much appreciate.