A Painting In Motion

a flutter of wings

a scattering of seeds

the nightly meal

of winged visitors

a picture painting in motion
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 6:03 AM
very pretty. I sure enjoy seeing your tanka collection when I can!
Poet Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 2:09 AM
Just beautiful Francine.Enjoyed the read.
Carrillo Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 10:12 AM
You have painted a beautiful painting of the night visitors. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla
Hicks Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 2:52 PM
Been missing out on your poetry while I was away in the UK. Really adore that last line of yours... sums up the poem nicely. Usually people feed birds, in the park, in daylight... must be kinda eerie at night, however!
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April 20, 2013 at 6:45 AM
Lovely..I have a little nest in the backyard with 3 bluejays babies. What fun Ive had watching them grow..constantly worried about the cat..if you know what I mean. Loved your poem. BG
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