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A Painting

My attempt to capture your beauty on canvas failed miserably Those eyebrows That nearly meet Your neck Slender and long The self portrait Looked at me Proudly As if to say “Look, this is who I am”. Secrets were shared with Your little conspirator Who knew Those dark eyes had Shed a river of tears Whose pursed lips hid Heartbreak and pain You both stared at me As if to say “Find yourself”. This poem is based on Frida Kahlo and her self portrait with monkey.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/22/2014 7:41:00 PM
Not familiar with that painting. I'll have to check it out.
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Linda Jackson
Date: 1/23/2014 10:55:00 AM
As a bit of a doodler, I did try to paint this picture but failed miserably. Best wishes Linda x
Date: 9/15/2013 5:57:00 AM
what can i say excellent in all ways
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Date: 8/28/2013 2:30:00 AM
TERRIFIC
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Date: 8/26/2013 7:11:00 PM
Excellent read this is Linda..really enjoyed the word play. :)
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Date: 8/21/2013 11:13:00 AM
A facinating write... Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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