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A Painting

My attempt 
          to capture
          your beauty on canvas
          failed miserably

         Those eyebrows
         That nearly meet
          Your neck
          Slender and long
          The self portrait
          Looked at me
          Proudly
          As if to say
         “Look, this is who I am”.

          Secrets were shared with
          Your little conspirator
          Who knew
          Those dark eyes had
          Shed a river of tears
          Whose pursed lips hid
           Heartbreak and pain

          You both stared at me
          As if to say
         “Find yourself”.

          This poem is based on Frida Kahlo and her self portrait with monkey.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/22/2014 7:41:00 PM
Not familiar with that painting. I'll have to check it out.
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Linda Jackson
Date: 1/23/2014 10:55:00 AM
As a bit of a doodler, I did try to paint this picture but failed miserably. Best wishes Linda x
Date: 9/15/2013 5:57:00 AM
what can i say excellent in all ways
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Date: 8/28/2013 2:30:00 AM
TERRIFIC
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Date: 8/26/2013 7:11:00 PM
Excellent read this is Linda..really enjoyed the word play. :)
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Date: 8/21/2013 11:13:00 AM
A facinating write... Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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