A One Eyed Jack

I have known hard times, friend,
And I've had cash to spend.
Slept on the ground a lot,
And on a rich man's cot.

I owned cows once or twice,
Lost 'em all with the dice.
Played some cards, won 'em back -
Lost to a one eyed Jack.

Fell in love with a maid
Who wore a long black braid.
She left town with my gold -
Left me here to get old.

Here I sit in this town -
Gave it up and sat down.
I like it here, I think,
Pipe to smoke, jar to drink.

What more could one soul want?
Could be a place to haunt.
Just lie here on my back -
Think of that one eyed Jack.

For contest 120 Words for Silent One
2-9-18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/14/2018 5:23:00 PM
Well written. One thing though not the one eyed dude but a rich man got you sleeping on a cot. Come on Larry. At least tell me you left with something. A shoelace, something.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/14/2018 10:45:00 PM
I was the rich man and it was my cot.and gamblin' with riches was never smart. I kept my pension and my pipe..sittin' on the porch suits me well
Date: 2/11/2018 8:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, Larry, enjoyed reading,,, it's not easy to use one syllable words and even harder with a rhyme to make a have way good poem .. Hugs Eve
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/12/2018 12:19:00 AM
Thank you Eve . That was harder than I thought it would be!
Date: 2/11/2018 11:21:00 AM
Wonderful as usual Larry, congratulations...
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/12/2018 12:20:00 AM
Thanks, Charlie. You're always a breath of west Texas air!!
Date: 2/10/2018 10:09:00 AM
Delightful read. Well done, Larry. Congrats on your win.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/12/2018 12:21:00 AM
Thank you . A pleasure hearing from you
Date: 2/10/2018 10:07:00 AM
Hi Larry, Good title and good story telling. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/12/2018 12:21:00 AM
Thanks, Alexis
Date: 2/10/2018 9:15:00 AM
Great storytelling Larry.. Congratualtions on your placement in the contest
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 2/12/2018 12:23:00 AM
Thank you for the placement, Silent One....It was a fun contest as usual from you
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