A Note To the Indian Princess

The aunites gossip back home
About how you've grown
Out of your white cotton frocks
And into red silk saris

They talk about how you're ripe for marriage
About how quickly boys flock to you--
Your family's rich and you are beautiful.
Like a princess but with none of the excess.

Their perfect Indian girl is rather simple.
But, the real you they can never comprehend.
Those brown khol-rimmed eyes with
That understated nose ring confuses them.
They'd rather ignore your luscious red mouth.

Those soft lips were like velvet as they brushed across my lashes as you pretended to blow sand out of my eyes one drunken night on a Konkan beach.

Both too scared to be the first to say anything
We just sat there drunk and giggling

When the aunties speak of you
I can't help but imagine
Things that leave
Little to the imagination.

I am a woman
And you are a woman

We're on the same page.

The boys will wait.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/2/2012 11:23:00 PM
STUPENDOUS WRITE!!! I enjoyed this much.You truly have writing skills......Elliott.....
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Date: 5/1/2012 2:53:00 PM
Great style and way of saying things that others make simply sick-romantic. Enjoyed. Congrats on this fine piece being selected. daver
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Date: 4/27/2012 7:52:00 PM
you are one of the better poets i have read on this site. lots of other stuff is kind of not genuine. keep it up i would like to read more of your work.
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Date: 4/27/2012 4:01:00 PM
Smile ~ She sounds so very beautiful and love is beautiful if it is true, pure and undefiled ~ My love, Always, John!:) ~
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