Punnia Viswan Bhatia Poet Elegiac Lyric

A Note To An Unknown Soul

We know not each other
We haven’t met ever
Still, I see your soul float
A silhouette behind a veil
Serene and blissful
Watching over your loved ones
Moan, and longing to caress once
But, know my friend, they are safe
Under your guardian spell
Accompanied by the lovely folks

You have done your part and
Let them set theirs now right
You worry not even a wee bit
For the Creator has a perfect plan done and
It will be done well
In time and space

You worry not my friend
Know now that you are free
From all spree
Fly high and be free
To a blissful land
REST IN PEACE & LOVE



-puvi-
18/12/2015

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Karen Da August 7, 2018 at 9:48 AM Very nice! Punnia Viswan Bhatia August 7, 2018 at 11:32 AM Thanks Karen..love and peace :)

Phil Capitano May 14, 2018 at 7:27 AM A prayer for all souls departed, puvi, this rocks. So well written and I can feel your compassion. Namaste. Punnia Viswan Bhatia May 14, 2018 at 7:30 AM That's a thoughtful reply Phil..thank you so much...god bless...:)

Constance La France August 7, 2016 at 3:32 PM This is BEAUTIFUL and I love it ~ Punnia Viswan Bhatia May 14, 2018 at 7:29 AM Thanks broken wings..stay blessed...

Brian Mcclain February 12, 2016 at 11:51 AM Wow, that is moving and haunting. Beautifully written. Punnia Viswan Bhatia February 12, 2016 at 12:05 PM Awww.. That is a really nice comment..thank you so very much..god bless you :))

Eric Boddie February 5, 2016 at 11:56 AM what a Lovely write....I cant imagine how it missed my sight....but I am glad I found it today....only remnants of a Beautiful Soul are on display....because these words could only come from a pure heart....a necessary requirement for the greatest art....I Love this....;) Punnia Viswan Bhatia February 6, 2016 at 12:26 PM Aww....this is such a lovely and beautiful comment..i feel the love :)) thank you so very much eric....:)))

Afolabi Muideen January 4, 2016 at 5:04 PM A very enjoyable write, glad to drop by...excellent...........A.M. Punnia Viswan Bhatia January 5, 2016 at 7:02 PM thank you Afolabi :) love and peace to you in this new year :)) God bless

Skat A December 31, 2015 at 11:16 PM Happy new years Punnia Viswan Bhatia January 1, 2016 at 2:17 AM thank you Skat :)) Wish you a happy and fun filled new year :)) Stay blessed..

Poet Destroyer A December 30, 2015 at 1:20 PM beautiful read, thank you for sharing:) ... Happy New Years... Always ~LINDA~ Punnia Viswan Bhatia January 1, 2016 at 2:16 AM thank you Linda... :)) wishing you and family a very happy and prosperous new year dear :) Stay blessed always

Arthur Vaso December 29, 2015 at 9:44 PM So Beautiful, the last verse takes a turn, I love this style of writing, and your Hat!!!! Merry Christmas! Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 30, 2015 at 9:11 AM awww...thank you Arthur..wishing you a Merry Christmas and a wonderful beautiful peaceful lovely year ahead :)) missed you lots these past few days...what happened??were you busy with Christmas??

Liam Mcdaid December 28, 2015 at 6:29 PM outstanding piece of writing i pray you had a lovely chrismas and a happy new year Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 28, 2015 at 8:30 PM thank you so much for the sincere wishes and prayer :) You are included in my prayers already :)) Wishing you a peace-filled fun-filled successful year ahead :))

Poet Destroyer A December 25, 2015 at 10:11 PM Love the note to the soul. Have to keep this in mind. Puvi, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 26, 2015 at 3:17 AM wow..that's a wonderful self assessment LINDA :)) don't feel shame on yourself for you too have a blessed soul :)) thank you very much for the lovely and elevating comment...glad that you liked this :) Belated Christmas wishes and also wishing you and praying for you to have a very happy fun-filled love-filled peace-filled prosperous new year dear :)) :*

Njeri Hunjeri December 24, 2015 at 12:13 PM A powerful message with a lifting light. Have a merry Christmas and happy new year Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 24, 2015 at 11:49 PM Thank you friend...wishing you too a very happy christmas :)

Robert Lindley December 20, 2015 at 10:07 AM Beautiful message, inspiring words and great season's hope expressed! A7 Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 20, 2015 at 10:26 AM Thank you robert for the lovely comment and high rate..take care.god bless