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A Note To An Unknown Soul

We know not each other
We haven’t met ever
Still, I see your soul float
A silhouette behind a veil
Serene and blissful
Watching over your loved ones
Moan, and longing to caress once
But, know my friend, they are safe
Under your guardian spell
Accompanied by the lovely folks

You have done your part and
Let them set theirs now right
You worry not even a wee bit
For the Creator has a perfect plan done and
It will be done well
In time and space

You worry not my friend
Know now that you are free
From all spree
Fly high and be free
To a blissful land
REST IN PEACE & LOVE



-puvi-
18/12/2015

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Karen Da

Date: 8/7/2018 9:48:00 AM

Very nice!

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 8/7/2018 11:32:00 AM

Thanks Karen..love and peace :)

Phil Capitano

Date: 5/14/2018 7:27:00 AM

A prayer for all souls departed, puvi, this rocks. So well written and I can feel your compassion. Namaste.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 5/14/2018 7:30:00 AM

That's a thoughtful reply Phil..thank you so much...god bless...:)

Constance La France

Date: 8/7/2016 3:32:00 PM

This is BEAUTIFUL and I love it ~

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 5/14/2018 7:29:00 AM

Thanks broken wings..stay blessed...

Brian Mcclain

Date: 2/12/2016 11:51:00 AM

Wow, that is moving and haunting. Beautifully written.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 2/12/2016 12:05:00 PM

Awww.. That is a really nice comment..thank you so very much..god bless you :))

Eric Boddie

Date: 2/5/2016 11:56:00 AM

what a Lovely write....I cant imagine how it missed my sight....but I am glad I found it today....only remnants of a Beautiful Soul are on display....because these words could only come from a pure heart....a necessary requirement for the greatest art....I Love this....;)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 2/6/2016 12:26:00 PM

Aww....this is such a lovely and beautiful comment..i feel the love :)) thank you so very much eric....:)))

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 1/4/2016 5:04:00 PM

A very enjoyable write, glad to drop by...excellent...........A.M.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 1/5/2016 7:02:00 PM

thank you Afolabi :) love and peace to you in this new year :)) God bless

Skat A

Date: 12/31/2015 11:16:00 PM

Happy new years

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 1/1/2016 2:17:00 AM

thank you Skat :)) Wish you a happy and fun filled new year :)) Stay blessed..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/30/2015 1:20:00 PM

beautiful read, thank you for sharing:) ... Happy New Years... Always ~LINDA~

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 1/1/2016 2:16:00 AM

thank you Linda... :)) wishing you and family a very happy and prosperous new year dear :) Stay blessed always

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/29/2015 9:44:00 PM

So Beautiful, the last verse takes a turn, I love this style of writing, and your Hat!!!! Merry Christmas!

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/30/2015 9:11:00 AM

awww...thank you Arthur..wishing you a Merry Christmas and a wonderful beautiful peaceful lovely year ahead :)) missed you lots these past few days...what happened??were you busy with Christmas??

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/28/2015 6:29:00 PM

outstanding piece of writing i pray you had a lovely chrismas and a happy new year

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/28/2015 8:30:00 PM

thank you so much for the sincere wishes and prayer :) You are included in my prayers already :)) Wishing you a peace-filled fun-filled successful year ahead :))

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2015 10:11:00 PM

Love the note to the soul. Have to keep this in mind. Puvi, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Punnia Viswan Bhatia
Date: 12/26/2015 3:17:00 AM

wow..that's a wonderful self assessment LINDA :)) don't feel shame on yourself for you too have a blessed soul :)) thank you very much for the lovely and elevating comment...glad that you liked this :) Belated Christmas wishes and also wishing you and praying for you to have a very happy fun-filled love-filled peace-filled prosperous new year dear :)) :*